7 human beings are sent to Equestria one night. With no known way to return, they could be stuck there. How will they fit into the storyline?
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Good chapter but there where spelling errors all threw out it. I recommend proof reading it and fixing it asap.
6615762 If you've read the author's notes, you would see that I am pretty big on spelling and grammar. I did proof read it. However, I'm only human. I'm bound to make mistakes. I do appreciate you pointing out flaws in the story, though. I only ask that you could point out the misspelled words next time so I could correct them before it ruins someone else's reading experience. I'll look for it this time and give thanks to you in the author's note.
Oh, and if you're talking about the last part, where Xavier is sick, I pretty much just typed things in the dialect of someone with a stuffed nose. You won't be able to pronounce your 'n's and 'm's.
Also, I believe you meant to say "There were spelling errors throughout the chapter." Not trying to be rude, but it'd be good to have proper grammar and spelling before correcting someone else's.
I'm glad you liked the chapter otherwise. I'll keep doing my best to keep you and the other readers satisfied.
6615762 through, not threw.
The trolls! Bucking hilarious!
Using the symbols for numbers instead of spelling the word out is bad form. Also, you can't get sick from just getting a bit wet and chilly!
7009561 it depends how bad the cold if its a small cold then nothing bad will happen if it was a bad cold then your nose would get bunged up making some of the words you say sound different and sometimes a cold ends up giving you a fever or other type ill moments such as cause a virus to your voicebox making it hard to talk normally