7 human beings are sent to Equestria one night. With no known way to return, they could be stuck there. How will they fit into the storyline?
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This chapter was insane.
6720904 Nothing's ever sane in the mind of a hyperactive kid.
Yeek, a handgun is one thing, but an UZI?! That shouts out overkill!
6720970 Spare no expense when in the Everfree. But hey, it's not like it was used or anything.
I found a few mistakes:
GIrls!
"You have to leave the forest at once" (Missing punctuation)
Anyways, awesome chapter! And Jonthan's POV - !
Sidenote: Weeabos? Wat. In Equestria? Oh gods.
We obtain the same result with an IKEA table without instruction booklet^^
Ands I have my answer to Jeff and his reaction. I thought it would be something completely different.
6722234 You mean Jack, right? Jeff still doesn't know.
6722574 jack I mean. Bleee! Brain being stupid right now. Sorry.
6732613 .....Good point
Hey I am glad you will be skipping episodes that don't work well with the humans. You are the man. By the way great chapter.
6734318 The incoming chapter'll have colored sentences. We'll see how everyone likes it.
....why do i have the urge to play final fantasy games??
Xavier won't, but someone else will...
when discord shows up.... the turnips shall wage war!!!
''especially when they haven't even invented the phone yet''
Twilight could ask the security guards of vinyl or sapphire shores, they use wireless redset.
This is not a criticism, I understand when altor writes his MLP universe without these technologies =)