7 human beings are sent to Equestria one night. With no known way to return, they could be stuck there. How will they fit into the storyline?
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is that a legend of zelda majorias mask reference i see
Damn you Xavier making me envious of that awesome mass effect dream
For a moment I thought Xavier was the hulk buster ... Mostly because I haven't heard of a space marine before..... Can't wait for next chapter!
You forgot to color that one
7030387 fixed. next time, just inbox me any errors please.
7030417 Ok
I got a lot of the references in this chapter. good read. Love the Space Marine.
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too bad nobody got dressed as Freddy Krueger or Jason.
Planet of the ponies is a good story. I read it before this one.
And I dare not speak of the costumes.
7031610 Too mainstream.
7033053 Jack'd take it as a compliment since he's a fan of the movie.
7031518 This is Pinkie we're talking about. Not everything makes sense with her.
ok so I got jack as the Mass Effect soldier (never played them, just heard of them,). his lil brother as Naruto. Jeff as... I'm guessing a customized TF2 heavy? idk. hiroto as a pokemon trainer. we all know about the space marines *cough- Dawn of War -cough* but what is Traevon dressed as?
Also their was an error I found in this section:
if this is not an error then i'm stumped, I'm guessing Cloud from FF. (I'm guessing)
OK, I finally caught up and will be ready for the next chapter. With that said, I want to address the only problem I have with this fic: the colorized pony dialogue. I was mostly surprised by this at first, but by the time I was getting to Lyra and Diamond Tiara talking, I could barely make out any of the words they were saying! Every time I was having to look at those hard to read conversations, I was feeling Seinfeld when he couldn't understand what the soft speaker was telling him. Do you even need to colorize the ponies' dialogue? I'm pretty sure everyone can tell which pony is talking if you just stick to just typing "Said Twilight" or at least just colorize the quotation marks and let the words stay black.
7039027 It should be Jack saying that. I'll fix it.
As for the no adult on kid violence thing, I feel that although Spike is called a 'baby' dragon, keep in mind that he was hatched by Twilight when she was a filly before she got her cutie mark. Spike can't be that much younger than Twilight, 6 or 7 years tops. I wouldn't call Spike a kid but a teen by age, and that's not even taking the theories about a dragon's lifespan into consideration.
7066463 I was aiming for doing something different that not many other writers do or considered doing, and I kinda felt that saying "he said she said" was getting quite repetitive. Believe it or not, just coloring the quotes was my first idea, but several of my readers commented/inboxed me saying I should just color the whole sentences.
Personally I do like it better also. Not only is it more simple to just highlight the sentence and hit the color, but to me, it adds 'voice' to the characters. I do realize that over half of the ponies have brightly colored coats, like Lyra, so I use the hex colored codes of their outlines instead to make it more readable.
I hope that answers your question. I'll try to lesson the brightness for you though.
7037766 Jonathan is Jack's little brother. Wouldn't you say Goku is pretty brave?. Traevon is dressed as Beat from JSRF, and Jeff is dressed as Duke Nukem.
7030151 I totally didn't even see that reference.
Well that was unexpected... Did not think Flutters would get the stare herself!
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Too bad they couldn't have dressed up Trae's car to look like a Baneblade and gotten Xavier a Commissar Lord uniform...
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"It's been little over a month since I sent Princess Celestia that letter under 'Plottimus Saggington.'"
HAHAHAH! What's next? She's going to get a letter from Biggus Dickus?!?!? HAHAHAHAH!!!!
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