7 human beings are sent to Equestria one night. With no known way to return, they could be stuck there. How will they fit into the storyline?
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6584715 I was just pointing out the several times tar ration sort of interrupted itself, asked the reader a question, then answered it, where it probably would have flowed better to just incorporate the details in your answer into the uninterrupted narrative.
6584745 Oh that. That was supposed to be for hilarity purposes. Nothing like a writer with a sense of humor.
He is channelling the power of celestia!
I've started on the next three chapters everyone!
Don't eve mess with someone's family. They will not hesitate to kill you.
The AK- 47 is a automatic assault rifle, so it should have shot a burst of at least 3 bullets
6688086 Xavier had the handgun.
I thought she was about to say he was about to barf
This story is cool, but towards the end you should probably change it to "never been SO scared" since I'm pretty sure AppleJack has been scared before in her life
Pretty nice so far