7 human beings are sent to Equestria one night. With no known way to return, they could be stuck there. How will they fit into the storyline?
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I like the premise, I'll keep an eye on this for a little while. Quick tip: get away from second person narration as quickly as you can, there is almost no way you can make it sound good unless your writing it from the "readers" perspective, and the reader is an actual charachtar.
6584641 The pilot is supposed to be in third person in order to introduce the characters and what goes on. The entire story is mostly going to be in first person, and maybe third person if there's a lot going on around a simple character, or if it'd be better to tell the part of the story from outside a person's point of view.
Tell me, when did you start writing this?
YES. finally a story where a human and his house gets teleported to equestria. lets see what will happen in chapter 2..
6633746 October 30th. Still writing. I'm nearing the gala 'sode.
6633880 There's another HiE fiction where a human and his entire barn gets transported to Equestria. I don't think the author updated it in a while. Could be dead. The story I mean.
Let it begin
... Did he buy a plastic Zabuza sword? What happened after the five years?
7009418 They had another kid
wow, look i'm not trying to be a pessimist but trying so many characters on a first fic? not a good idea. take it from me, my second story went way out of whack from having way to many individuals in my one OC's herd. having multiple OC humans? that's really hard to pull of even for authors that have been through the ringer. let's see how this turns out shall we
7278858 It's easier if you write down a reference guide for each character. Their likes, dislikes, strengths, weaknesses, personalities, birthdays, hobbies, etc. If you can do that, you can have as many OCs as you'd like.
7279056 I tried that, but was told to show, not tell, with my OCs.
6633880 uh, sorry to say that's already been done.
My name jeff yeah I want there
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Well yes, obviously, but the reference sheet can be a separate thing you use yourself. It doesn't have to be in the story or anything.