Twilight Sparkle always knew she was brilliant at magic but she didn't realise she was good enough to become a Xiaolin dragon... and a good one at that. Her new friends seem to be confused by her pony demeanour but nevertheless have to put up with their pony friend no matter what, especially with a new few villains to contend with and some strange Shen gong wu to find in the newest of places...
I do not in anyway own Xiaolin Showdown or My Little Pony. I just love them both so much that I decided to see what would happen if they met. Props to Tara Strong who voiced in both. Picture 'Angry Twilight' by Ivan Chan and uniform added by me. Anyways hope you enjoy.
Chapters (5)
Interesting enough of idea.
I was thinking of something like this, only with the Mane Cast as the characters.
jar 'o'mayo- spoiler alert: I am planning to bring in the rest of the mane 6 at some time or other as well as a few others. Anybody got any idea who can work with Chase Young
The idea is good, and I don't think I've seen it before, but first impressions make it seem like the writing could use a bit of a tune up. If you work a bit more on keeping the flow of dialogue going without the use of 'said' and improve the punctuation use. I'm not perfect, but sentences that have been spoken also end with a full stop.
If you manage to improve that, you might be onto a far more professional looking story.
I'll be keeping an eye on this.
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I should mention this includes 'shouted', 'spoke' or anything similar. Ideally, your sentences should flow naturally and not be overly reliant on these.
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Ha, you say that like the answer isn't obvious, darling...
But for shits and giggles just throw Pinkie in there.
Oh Pinkie is going to be in it alright but I have promised myself not to give too many spoilers so I can't say anymore. But one thing I can say is I do know where Pinkie is going to go, hehehe
I feel like I would get this a lot more if I actually had watched the other show.
You know I never realised before how alike the two shows are:
1. Tara Strong voices characters in both
2. They contain stereotypical cowboys/girls
3. They have strong magical weapons e.g. Shen gong wu and the elements
4. In each the people/ponies represent certain elements
5. Each show has a dragon who is their friend
670122 Not to mention that that dragon is normally small and in one episode becomes giant and destroys everything
Oh god what is Pinkie got her hoofs on the Kuzusu Atom!?!?!?!?
Hang on, I swear someone else is doing this...
670772 Crazy huh?
684703 Thanks for that. I must have missed that when I read it through about a thousand times. Perfectionist tendencies kicking in... must go correct
You know, they do use the word girl in MLP:FIM.
691225 Yes, that was really just put in there for comedic effect, and to show the differences between the little pony and the xiaolin warriors. Sorry if it distracted you from the story or something but it really was just there to exagerate how different the two creatures are
743200 Why did he make Kuzuzu atom or others? I'm really looking forward to the next chapter...it's going to be fun to write
743314 If AJ got the Wings of Tinabi, Rainbow would be really jealous because AJ would have become 20% cooler
743304 Dashi has an evil side...Maybe he drank the soup as well but it only lasted for a short while; he created them during this evil period
743344 True True. Hey by the way I did Under the Sea. Did you want Part of your World next?
743373 Will do
NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PETER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
1503798 It was in the last chapter. Sorry for taking so long to update
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hoe long does it take generally to update a story like this i mean that long?
3101201 Er.... Unfortunately, yes. I know where it's going but haven't been able to write anything down yet.
Sorry
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