A girl so bad at writing she took to learning how to write at University. How'm I doing so far? Yeah, I know-- I'm working on it, I promise.
Original story idea and title was Cid Gaius in the Author Support group threads. Thanks for the great storyline to work with Cid.
Pound and Pumpkin Cake come together with other ponies to commemerate the life of a very special pink party pony that everypony knew and loved.
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730109 Thanks. It was my first time writing a sad story and I had to put a poem in there. Couldn't resist really
730117 Question: Should this be rated for 'everyone' or teen?
730137 Oh thanks. I think I must have changed it by accident then. I got confused why it had a teen rating on it. I don't even like teen books so how could I write a teen story? Oh well I changed it back anyway
It should be everyone, definitely - even kids can read stories about funerals and the passing of old loved ones. They even should, I think. You must talk about such things to prepare them for life.
Oh, and sweet story!
730253 Thanks glad you like it. But I should be thanking you for the great storyline. Pinkie would be proud
730352 Indeed she would.
So elegantly written, and so brilliantly conceived. Bravo!
B-b-but...Pinkie...no...
At least she's in a better place...
735750 Don't worry we'll all remember her. She knows we all care about her
736103 You think it's a great story. Okay I'm just going to go cry with Pinkie Pie
736151 I'm happy. You just gave me a major confidence boost my friend
Oh, dear...
This is lovely.
Funnily enough, Pinkie's death is a major catalyst in my story Mantles. I never thought to include grown-up Pound and Pumpkin... I love it. I may steal your idea here.
If, of course, it's all right with you.
741093 It was actually CID Gaius who came up with the idea, I just wrote the actual story. I'm sure he wouldn't mind you using it though
Oh stars and stones, there are the tears. Short but very, very powerful. *applauds*
Could use another go through to fix a handful of grammar mistakes, but damn, that was a good one.
I think you should try more of these--short, to the point, but heavy with emotion. You may find you have a flair for it.