• Member Since 1st Apr, 2015
  • offline last seen January 31st

HopeForTheFew


I am just a simple guy, creating stories for the fun of it.

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One boy is brought to another world by a strange creature, and he doesn't enjoy his experience there

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 28 )

Fuck you ponies, and fuck you Celestia for alowing this to happen.

6299245 lol. This is a alternate universe, but feel free to release your anger.

Squeal squeal plzzzzzzzzzzzzz loved it

6326594 I might create a sequel, but only time will tell.

6326600 dlnt give mee that wise old man shit:flutterrage: opps sorry:fluttershbad:

6326618 That's who I am, my friend. :raritywink:

Its good and sad AND IT DEMANDS FOR A SEQUEL :flutterrage:
Please:fluttershyouch:

6476736 I might create a sequel but if I were to do that then I would have to edit this story heavily. Not change it, just edit it, but it will take some time and to be honest, I never really imagined I would get people who actually like this story. Thank you my friend.

6477172 NO worries it was an amazing story, I have to say you got a real talent in creating such wonderful stories :pinkiehappy:

6496856 It remains a mystery...

Sequel is needed.

6716833 Maybe, but I really don't think I will ever return to this story...

6718010 Because I kinda lost interest in this story? Truth be told, I plan to get back to all my stories, but this one is really sitting on the back shelf...

Are you kidding me?

I liked the story. The tragedy was that the boy died of neglect. No sequel is needed. The story stands well by itself, with no explanation needed.

7713159 The story in itself needs a little work. But I thank you for taking the time to give it a shot, and I do hope you found some enjoyment in it.

Same hypocritical BS.

8686020 I wouldn't be surprised if this story contradicted itself, I was just learning to write at that time however. And I'm sorry if there was anything in here that offended you, but I won't be taking it own any time soon. I leave this and all my other trash stories as remnants of my failed past, so that I can look back sometime and see just how far I've come.

"Spend all your time waiting
For that second chance
For a break that would make it okay
There's always some reason
To feel not good enough
And it's hard at the end of the day
I need some distraction
Oh a beautiful release
Memories seep from my veins
Let me be empty
Oh and weightless and maybe
I'll find some peace tonight

In the arms of the angel
Fly away from here
From this dark cold hotel room
And the endlessness that you fear
You are pulled from the wreckage
Of your silent reverie
You're in the arms of the angel

May you find some comfort here

So tired of the straight line
And everywhere you turn
There's vultures and thieves at your back
And the storm keeps on twisting
You keep on building the lies
That you make up for all that you lack
It don't make no difference
Escaping one last time

It's easier to believe
In this sweet madness

Oh this glorious sadness
That brings me to my knees
In the arms of the angel
Fly away from here
From this dark cold hotel room
And the endlessness that you fear
You are pulled from the wreckage
Of your silent reverie
You're in the arms of the angel
May you find some comfort here
You're in the arms of the angel
May you find some comfort here"

i cannot believe that i've just read this!
BEING KIDNAPPED AND THEN LEFT UNTIL IT'S OVER? FUCK NO! How dare they not give the kid proper treatment, Freedom or even a new home? OUTRAGEOUS!!!:twilightangry2:

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