I am just a simple guy, creating stories for the fun of it.
I was only fourteen when it happened. I was brought to another world. A world that is trying to kill me now. But still I have hope... I live by hope... It fuels me... it gives me peace.
There is now a sequel out for this story called: Standing In Hope. Go check it out if you want.
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5934387 Thanks bud. Yeah I can tell its a bit rushed, I thought it was when I reread it again. I will try to correct that next time.
As for you editing it, I will think about it.
Good, seemed a bit fast paced, BUT it left me wanting a whole other story on this! (Otherwise, great job!)
5934798 I do think its a great job
especially since its only my second story.
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Just asking, but are you planning on making a sequel, because I REALLY want AppleAss(New name for her as long as this story has er as a liar) to have JUSTICE! xD
5934807 If it is well liked then yes, I will create a sequel. When/if I create a sequel then I will probably have it out later today or sometime this week.
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K, thanks for telling me! :D
5934819 Your welcome, friend.
5938384 lol. I am going to make a sequel, in fact its already being examined. This is going to be a three part series. The reason I choose to wright each one complete is because each picture I have for each story, has something to do with the story. (Also the second story is called: (Standing In Hope.) Hope you like
Also, this wasn't meant to be very sad series, more like a troubling series. The protagonist finds himself taken away from a world he hates only to be brought to a place he hates more.
And one more thing, the picture is representing his downtrodden life, its not him, just a resemblance.
6628732 Thank you my friend I might just do that but right now I am busy writing a new story called King Of The broken. But I will take that into quite a consideration because I agree with you, that does sound cool!
Also Its nice to hear from you again!
*too
Otherwise, a great story :)
6656790 Cheers!
I hope they all find out Aj was lying, and then they put her through the same suffering. And isnt Aj a terrible liar anyway?
8230582 This story was written well before that episode was put out, but I'm glad you dig it to an extent mate.
I wish this story was written better, as it was my first (mild) success on this site and I was not a good writer back then.
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Hey, for a first successful story, its pretty damn good! And I dont usually cuss for something other than bad reasons, so take that as a compliment!!
8233301 I appreciate it.
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Np!
Still sucks.
9245745 Your absolutely right, this story is awful. For practically the first story I ever wrote though, it isn't too awful. And that's why I leave it here, I look back on it and I can see how far I've come. My story Mockingbird is a small testament to that. Really, I still have a long ways to go but I'm glad that I am going somewhere.
Thanks for checking my story out mate.