Celestia has taught many students, which she has a candle to remember them by. Every know and then, she lights a candle to remember them by.
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Just some random person on the internet that writes stories about a show with ponies. I try not to suck at writing. Am I good at it? I don't know. I just do it for fun.
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Those feels, man.
I found one mistake through this whole thing!
Last line in paragraph 12- "Loose" should be "lose".
Love it. Fav'd.
So sad... But so true.
Yes!
Im not sure if this is a coincidence or not but I feel I should post this comic anyway img.ponibooru.org/_images/00522d2931a9ad0a0e3802650d310f58/36826%20-%20artist%3Amisteraibo%20candle%20celestia%20comic%20immortality_blues%20sad.png
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That's excatly what I was thinking when I saw the title.
And now I'm thinking Celestia's chandlers must be hella busy.
I just wanted to reach in, and give Celestia a hug. No one ever said immortality was fun. Although... wouldn't the technical term be 'eternal', rather than 'immortal'? A lot of people get those confused. 'Immortal' means 'unable to die'. 'Eternal' means 'unable to die of natural causes'.
Will this piece be continued, because it says incomplete, however this just feels like a one piece to me. Sad, short, and to a powerful point.
A sad story...to be honest I would hate to be Princess Celestia going through all that pain.
The story was short and sweet, so touching.
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I don't know. I'm a project guy and it would be great to be able to finish my life's works. I'm also pretty social, so it would be hard. However, I would get the chance to get involved with so many great individuals. You would also have the chance to help those that past live on as a firt hand witness and friend. The sad part would be forgetting the older relationships.
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I was sort of inspired by that comic.
that was very sad. almost made me shed a manly tear. and that is very hard to do.
While i enjoyed the story, i've began to notice a lack of stories about immortality being a boon. They are always sad, cry fests in someway.
I need to write a fic about immortality not sucking.
Wow...
♪Who wants to live foreverrr...♪
DAMN I keep crying but...I dont care Listen to this while reading
I just listened to JamesIsTheBrony read this on YouTube, and I have to say, the saddest thing about it is how poorly it's written.
Oh, your plain mechanics are fine, don't get me wrong. But there is more to telling a story than spelling and grammar. The fact is, this piece is a perfect example of why we need the adage "show, don't tell". Does Celestia normally go about, monologuing her emotions to herself? She tells us about the past, tells herself how she's feeling, then tells Twilight a bunch of stuff. That's not effective storytelling (a word that needs to be excised from the English language for being misleading).
I could go into how this is not a story (a story needs a plot, plot requires conflict, there is no conflict, thus no plot and no story), but I'll leave off by saying that immortality and extreme longevity are common tropes in pony fanfic, and thus realms that have been written to death. Your attempt to squeeze emotion from this cliche adds nothing to the overall body of work based around the concept, and that is most specifically why this is not effective.
me: feel are overloading
Renamon: slaps me in face
ME: thanks
any was this story made me tear up in the middle of class
You're killing me, man. This is VERY painful. Immortality. Tis both a blessing and a curse.
I mean, I should know. I'm an invincible robot!
For every story I love, I make a song for. The song length depends on how much I love it. So get ready to know how much I do
In the shadow of the night
In the sunshine of the daylight
Remember I will forever remember you
Don't be afraid to go
It only makes it worse
Cherish your life
For you might not have it long...
So please don't be frightened of this time
For even if your gone, you will always play a part of my life
Immortality suck. Cause all your loved ones dies.does cadence even know that she will outlive shining armor?
Love this story soo much
And for the first time in her history, she buckled. Twilight is an alicorn and that candle need never be lit.