It's been a long time, yet we still have well over a decade and a half to go Luna. Where did I go wrong...
My name is Princess Celestia, here I have written a small collection of my thoughts; thoughts on my sister, the time that passes between my hooves, and topics that not to many ponies think of. Least not the way I put down.
If you have the luck of finding this note please open it and read it at least. I want somepony to see my thoughts, if not at least a few somewhere.
(Inspired partly by said picture. Ended up being a lot bigger then expected. This takes place about 16 years before Nightmare moon is set free and before Celestia meets Twilight Sparkle. It's a collection of many of my deeper thoughts, I kinda do hope this gets the featured box...though i'm not sure if that'll happen.)
Special thanks goes to AlicornPreist for being my proofreader.
I had a plan for a fic when i saw that picture.. when I worked on it I kept putting more ideas in it.
I wanted it to feel like Celestia yet still a little human to...or equine.
Do tell me your thoughts! Couldn't find a prereader other then my dad...
it's pretty good, i didn't notice many spelling mistakes, and you wrote it rather well. After all i imagine a 1000+ year old demi-goddess' mind would wander from topic to topic if she was just sitting there; After all she knows more then anybody and her mind does have a lot to work with, and you wrote her believably, she seems grounded like in the show and all.
Good work here Bro.
Made me think lots of things, Far too much things.
757220 Thank you!
Yeah darn errors allawys find some way to sneak in... but i'm glad it turned out good anyway!
757253 Thanks! Was a combination of My deeper and some of Celestias more complex thoughts.
good stuff
I like it.
I can really feel the drive going through it. sure there are a few spelling mistakes but I'm sure those can be improved.
762327 Yeah... I'm supprised by how bone headed my grammer mistakes can be.
Corse that's what i get for Staying up ALL night 5 Night in a row Working on this this(slept during middle of day). I reviewed this once, and somehow an N that supposed to be in sneaked in. My word document said this was clean to!
Ugh... if only i could write at some other time then night. First World Problems
Oh, and Thanks for taking to time to see my story! ^^
(I knew i should've waited to get a proofreader, there goes that featured box.
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That was...interesting. I'd really like to see more like this.
861578 Thank you! I'm not sure if i'll write more of these things. but I think I'll have some things like this in my other stories.
...Whenever i get around to writing them.
Oh, if you liked this you might like my story To Truly Break Though Where Pinkie has a chat with you. Not as well edited... cause Pinkie wouldn't let me touch the finished version after it was done.
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i read a little into this, and it is really depressing
1093490 Really?
Sorry, I intending it to be a little sad but not to much.
*ufficial review*
guess how long it took me to read this? Fourty-two minutes, one second. not counting whatever I missed. Lets see what I remember...
and this is like the third fic ive ever red
I like chestnuts.
celestia still thinks through time even though it wont end
soften her pain and shower her in diamonds, she would get a royal smack for that sort of attitude
and you implied that humans exist. which is something i can never forgive you for.
pretty sure that it is possible to no everything
i like where you mentioned stone and details and controlling stars
like an impossible triangle
and i like the last couple lines
but i think making six elements is a bit copying zelda... just kidding
so basically I hated it, and all first-person fics
I was waiting for her to reach 1000 years, so wtf
Also liked where you said reason not to. but not tolerance
anything else *end review*