Hello. My name is Twilight sparkle, and i was asked to make a bio of the semi-famous pony Derpy/Ditzy. I heard her poulary siked recently, so i'm going to give details of her and how she became derped. Hope you enjoy!
~TwilightSparkle
NOTE: This is by no means my first writing, but it is my first pony fic, and it's a bio, and it's the first thing i posted here. I used to to get used to all the features that i now have here as well and how posting a story works. That, and i really wanted to make that pun "Branded for life", i was even willing to do a bio just to do it. PLus some cannon things were a bit confusing to me, so i decided to make an explanation. I may not be right with everything, so forgive me for that
cover by skeptic mousy on Devantart. photos in the Bio by.. alot of people. Derp, i hope no one's mad... but then again it's all just vectors of a show.
Nice story. You made it sound as if it were Twilight really reading it.
Just one thing to correct thought, and don't be mad, it's just bugging me.
In the first paragraph on the third sentence, it is not "certain particular." It is either "certain" or "particular."
VERY good short story.
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OH MY ryjguytgk HOw DARE YOU MOCK MY EPIC SPILLI- SPELLIN? who you think you are a dictionary?!
I'm kiddin
Really i was more afraid that i may may have got a bad fact or that i didn't use the right term of dialect for twilight.
Fixed that little error, and thank you for reading!
That was interesting. Although part of me was expecting a bit more..... Anyways, job well done.
163714 Oh really? well like what, some more special details of cannon? I mean if people really want ot i may add more
163947 Well, I'm working on my first story, and I'm going to be having Ditzy/Derpy as part of the story. Sadly inspiration is evading me a bit and I have to look around for something to relight my creative thinking, of course to get my mind flow working where I want it, I need to find inspiration that matches the content of the work I'm on, otherwise I end up with a big mush of whoknowswhat with a side of broken thoughts. My mind just works in that strange way.
I must say that your work with the pictures is a very nice effect with this story. Makes me wish I could actually draw. But reading this has provided me with some inspiration that I can get back to work on the story for a bit. So hopefully I should have this darn third chapter up so that I can get to work on the forth one.
Now I did say I was expecting a bit more, but that was just my expectations, they always expect more. What you did here was just perfect. Now if you are able to add a bit more, feel free to do so.
And I'm sorry that this came out as a lot of rambles, but when asked to get a point, my mind likes to give out as many points as it can. The hard part is keeping those points in order and on subject.
164012 oh i see. XP Well okay then! the pictures i was testing since only a few anout of people bothered with it.
You know... i have other stories that i'm making, but before i post i'll need some prereaders... If you're bored i may let you review my stroies, if you want.
I think it's very cute~ I could really imagine Twilight lecturing me on Derpy. Probably the only thing that bothered me was some typos but that's pretty much it. You should definitely write more of these kind of things. Perhaps a whole series of Twilight talking about each pony in the series? It would be interesting.
223012 i might, though the main rason i made this was cause much of derpy cannon didn't make sence to me.
I may try one of the nightmare moon. The starting stort in the first episode said NMM was born of envy of the younger sister, fraust said she was turned into NMM ageinst her will...CANON, IT MAKES NO SENCE
the MUFFIN line was both colgate and derpy if you look at it colgate's and derpy's mouths moved the exact same way at the same time