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Midnight Sonare


In the rays of the sun I am longing for the darkness

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Equestria had face may terrors on the pass of the centuries, especially in the last years since Princess Luna's return. But nothing is compared to what is coming. Will ponies survive? Or will they be crushed under the hoof of true terror?
When certain mailmare finds a source of great power, Equestria and the life of every pony will change forever. For good or evil is still uncertain.


I'm not sure if I should add the Dark tag. It isn't that dark, but have some little dark moments.
I'll put a Slightly Dark tag here.

Special thanks to my editor, Scootareader

Covert art by myself.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 17 )

Is it... Derpra? I'm scared! Please don't show me Itseptemalsexosquinqueafquattuorimtreserduoodunus! I freaking hate him! Don't know who that is? Good! You're safe! Stay that way, lest you become traumatised like me!

... <Singing mode engaged>

PUT THIS THING RIGHT IN THE FEATURED BOX, OR SO HELP ME!
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This was bucking hilarious. I give it a solid five out of five.

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

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I would love that! :rainbowkiss:

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Thanks! I'm glad to hear that. :raritystarry:

I found it quite hilarious, Derpy and her accidental destructive tendencies dialled up 11. Princess Luna doing...THE THING. But the ending left me kinda meh. Personally I wanted a scene with Derpy and her daughters.

5076312 Agreed, in a situation like this, I can imagine what that'll be like.

"Mommy, why do you have a horn? And why's Princess Luna groveling at your hooves?"

"That's because mommy tried to give Princess Twilight an apple and now all of Equestria has made me princess."

"Where's Celestia."

".... Somewhere..."

As soon as she heard her sister's words, Celestia released a breath that she didn't know she was holding. “Thank the Aether!” she exclaimed.

Ah. I wondered what Celestia would thank.
Great Story!

You've got my like, it was cute and entertaining enough. I had this thing in my read later list for a while now. Though I wasn't really expecting that ending. More along the lines of it being a big misunderstanding and more 'mistakes' on Derpy's part. So up until Celestia appeared in front of Derpy, the story was great. Then on it kind of went down hill. Oh well, still got my like. Good read, now go eat a muffin. Derpy commands us all to eat our muffins.

Quaver Ava

you should make it into a long story thing :D

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I would do it, but sadly I have no idea of what to do next. :rainbowlaugh::fluttercry::facehoof:

5213757 maybe something like, how derpy would be as a leader , especially being derpy and having kids . AND how equestria would deal with another alicorn, expect this one doesn't know what she's doing.

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Mmmm... yeah, it could work. I'll probably do it, but only after I finished with the other two stories I'm writing. I've a story that hasn't been updated since last year.

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I think a mother might just make a better ruler than Celestia.
"No! You will NOT go to that bar, Prince Blueblood! You will clean your room and get a haircut!"
"You're not the boss of-"
*Gives Blueblood a spanking for going against 'mother's' wishes*
Celestia: "I should have done that ages ago!"

You wouldn't mind if you could expand on this story its both AWESOME and hilarious. Please this story is just so AWESOME!

Wait, did you reference the comics? With the orange Celestia mane thing?

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That was dreadful. Good story, not very comedic. Take an upvote and leave.

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