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StarSorio


Just a person who likes ponies and used to write FAn Fiction... then i took an IRL to the knee

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Hey everypony! oppes, i mean, every'brony.' Heheh, how's it goin?

Good, you? I've been great! Just got some cider so i have spare time now. I want to talk to you guys!

No pony takes me seriously when i say that there are people watching us, yet you're allways there! Just over that glass wall...

(Really talk and reply to pinkie for the best effect-ie)
(Inspired to make this fic by the cover picture, made by this guy here http://misterbrony.deviantart.com/art/The-4th-Barrier-281796908)

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 82 )

Hiya pinkie! Have some stars!

(and here's some emotes!)
:rainbowlaugh::yay::ajsmug::raritystarry::twilightsmile::pinkiehappy:

nice format of a fanfic

MAKE MORE :pinkiehappy:

PINKIE PIE.
if you were to make a house, how tall would it be?

Here haves some stars and for you Pinkie, a cupcake.[img]C:\Users\I\Desktop\metroid 885's folder\Gif's\pinkie-pie-is-a-cupcake-ninga_o_GIFSoup.com.gif[/img]


Aww gif Y U NO WORK :(

I love you too pinkie

Yes more pinkie pictures! It makes the story more lively

Pinkie, you can have some stars when I see the broken shards of the 4th wall. Until then you author! *glare* Take some stars!

but pinky i am smiling :D

223028:pinkiesmile: Hmm, good question, well it'd depend how i'd use my house! I'd like it to be big and colorful for me to have parties and pastries, but i can throw a great party anywhere! espicaly in places like the parks! Hmm... that's tricky...Maybe..Oh dear, i may have to use my fancy mathatics to mutter the issue! :pinkiehappy:

223088 Aww thank you.. geezuss!:pinkiehappy:

Pinkie Pie...Please...please never use Rainbow, or dash or *shiver* Cupcake...in the same sentence...ever again....Please*presses himself against the screen* I'm begging you.

Other then that it is good to talk to my favorite pony :) I hope you dont mind me using you in one of my fics. Well you and the rest of your friends, and the princesses :P I wont do anything bad to you girls I LOVE YOU ALL :)

*says really low to himself* other then pair you all up with an aztec god

Hello miss Pinkie Pie, will you tell me your take on the meaning of Life,The Universe and Everything? :duck:

:pinkiegasp: wow, 224364 I was just making some fun of that old thingie. You don't think i would do that to anypony now would you? I mean really you people bacome of rainbows and cupcakes! Oh well, you're humans:pinkiehappy:

And it's nice to talk to you to! And yay! i get to be in more stroies! ^^ I'll be there litacy split!

224432 :) great. Im sure you will love Tez. *whispers to himself* hope she doesnt mind the fact he is the aztec god of temptation and a few other things.*looks to Pinkie Pie* Nah she won't mind.

Well since your in my fic I'll introduce you to your *cough*futuresharedmate*cough* new friend Tez :)


Hello Pinkie Pie. I do hope we get along in Shadows fic. Though I believe we shall given how far he is into it already.

*Smiles* I know you two will get along great.

The pictures are brilliant. And it's impossible not to smile with Pinkie Pie talking to me! :pinkiehappy: *hugs Pinkie* I'd love to see more of this. :twilightsmile:

224387 Hmm, domyou mean that seriosly or you want my pinkie ness implying! :pinkiesmile:

The meaning of life isss.... 42! so i heard.

223064 :pinkiehappy: Yay! cupcakee! so sweet and tasty...and without anything from any crazy pouplar fic. :pinkiehappy:

222954 :pinkiehappy: Stars yay! *Mario star theme plays*

222960 might whenever i get the time. ...Ir if Pinkie invites some of her friends...

223091Thanks very much! ^^

223334 :pinkiegasp: But i need my stars!
No pinkie doesn't... you seen pinkie witth super stars before? rainbow sezires all around....

223088 :pinkiehappy::heart: one day...maybe

223409 :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy: It's fills my heart with sunshine all the while! Yes it DOES!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

224481:pinkiehappy: That's what Pinkie strives for!

:twilightsmile: Thanks! I just might do more.

224477 :pinkiehappy: Let it begin ! besides, can't be worse then that event with luna. Oh nothin!:pinkiesmile:

224543 Don't worry Pinkie Tez is just human, mostly :P and can change into a vicious cold blooded jaguar when he is really mad :) and he*cough*drinksbloodandeatshearts* But he is really nice to you ponies. Just dont look into his eyes when he tries to convience you to something and you should be....relativly okay.

Must you describe me Shadow? I can speak for myself. If this is one of the girls I'm going to-*gets his mouth covered by Shadow*

Hehehehehe*smiles* Well look at the time Tez has to go now*tosses Tez back into his fic*

Sad you cant talk about us to your friends Pinkie :( I really would love to know how the other girls will react to Tez. I guess I will just have to guess.

224487 Thank you so much miss Pinkie pie! I really hope you break through that meanie pants barrier that separates your world and ours. We could really use some Pinkie Pie awesomeness here.

224567 You're wellcome! don't worry! this barrier will never last!:pinkiegasp:

And you know.. the meaning of the universe and snuff... it has none. But if we all just did nothing it would all be boring! The point of life is to give it your own meaning! least that's what i really beleive. :pinkiehappy:

224565 oh i donno how they'd be...

Ps, maybe i could make cupcakes with him! With RAINBOW DASH!

CUPCAKES RAINBOWDASH! CUPCAKES RAINBOWDASH! :pinkiehappy: heheh i did htat just to startle you

224648 *Sits in the corner sucking his thumb*

Pinkie...can I ask some...questions?

First, how do you keep your hair that puffy?

Second, how does that party cannon work? And how do I get one?

Third, If you manage to get into our world will you take some of us into your world?

Fourth, the twin cakes....whos the real father?

and last, how come none of your family has bothered to visit you so far? Do you maintain contact with them? and....why rocks?

No worries Pinkie, I'll put the stars aside for you. And an undisclosed number of cupcakes for when I see results. If you bring friends then we can have a party too:yay:
It can be as awesome as you want! Cross my heart and hope to fly, stick a cupcake in my eye.

224685:pinkiesmile: Man you write a odd creture thing that eats peoples hearts yet you're scared of a cupcake? That's funny really!

Oh, this is how my hair always is! It's like this by my pinkie energy!

THe canon is hard to explane...i just have it ajusted to shoot at what's persofly in the area! and i add some pinkie power too...

It depends... i miiigghhhtttt...but after working so hard to get here... it'll depend!

The twins? ... What you talkin about? ... Ohhhhhhhh you mean that? well....IT'S A SECRET TO EVERYPONY.:pinkiehappy:

Oh we ALWAYS keep in contact! Those rocks are geodes it seems, lava bubbles that contain cystals inise and we have to roll them all, since it's near a volcano and there's a big phiniox dragon lives there... we call him bill.:pinkiesmile:

:224786 :pinkiehappy: Will doo! I pinkie promise so no backing down!

224879 What can I say I am a strange human. :P Which is why I am the best person to be diplomat for the human race to Equestria. :P THe princesses would just love me. THe inner machinations of my mind are an enigma.

:) Its fun to talk with you Pinkie. Well I have to get back to work on my fic. I will be putting you girls at the Gala soon :) only we will add Tez into the mix. if you thought you girls caused some chaos there on your own wait till I get done working my magic *evil grin and rubbing hands evilly*

Blood for the blood god as they say.

:pinkiehappy:224922 And cupca- sorry. Rainbows then! rainbows!
i'll see to it!

...bee sure to take a cup of flower and add it to the mix!

Pinkie, I wish that you can just come right through my screen right this second! You know how to make a sad guy like me smile when I see your face!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy: OK had to do it, sorry. But this is a great fic! LOVE THE VECTOR PICTURES! SO COOL! So tracking this! KEEP IT UP!

225055 :pinkiesmile: Trust me, 'i'd do the same in an instant if i could. Sharing smiles is one of the best thing i can ever think of doing!

(auther talking now) Thanks! i'm glad you liike this! I was planing on making this just a one shooter... but since everyone really likes it... I may have pinkie tell why she takes a pinkie promise so seriously...

Pinkie I wanted to ask you....how do you appear out of nowhere like you do? If I could learn to do that I would be king of the world :D

225997 Hush, all secrets in good time. Besides, where's the fun in knowing everything, right Pinkie? :scootangel:

225997 :pinkiehappy: That's simple! I just hop. Nothin to it! through times...

Well i'd love to say and chat but i'vea got work oa do! see ya!

Ps... rainbows

Oh Pinkie, your presence just to notice us is delight enough. Besides, wouldn't the cosmos be vaporized the instant you divide by zero? :rainbowwild:
YOU'D BE CRAAAAAZY TO DO SO! *Ahem* Regardless, please inform your author that he needs to spellcheck his story with a word processor, like open office or Google doc. And yeah, our world is what TVtropes summed up rather well, as sorta mix between a "crapsack utopia". Not completely bad, nor completely good. Just grey all over the place. Have you ever seen the world grey? I mean, I wouldn't be able to see the Sky, and Rainbow Dash wouldn't be a Rainbow now would she?

Technically though, you are breaking the fourth wall indirectly through this portal.
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And surely you could dimension hop and nab one of our personal computers for direct chat.
By the way, Daring Doo has just for some reason crash landed into the table next to you. Oddly, your Cider is intact.
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And hello Rainbow Dash. Why the sudden face?
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You tell her Pinkie! Now if you'll excuse me, I need to get to bed, it's 12:15 here!

StarSorio, " i "s should be " I "s.

DEFINITELY needs spell check and general proofreading. THE I IS CAPITALIZED! But criticisms aside, this is great, Pinkie Pie breaking the fourth wall DIRECTLY TO US is always fun to see. Keep it up, and use spell check! Open Office is free, you know!

229737 you know, funny story really, another guy pointed that out, so i pasted this chapter to wor and am curently working on fixing it. Then I saw myself get 2 emails. I tried to log in, but then i got errors saying it was the wrong password... then after frstration.. i found out that i was simply using a password for ANOTHER account of mine...

.And on the note of grammer, how did I miss all those III's! I mean,I don't think i could've missed more i's if i tri- I'm DOING IT AGAIN!... That's what i...I get for writing at midnight.

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No worries, really. If a story's entertaining, then it's really easy to get over any errors one sees. I just hope that this continues! You have it marked as "Incomplete" so I hope that means that you're planning on continuing this, because Pinkie Pie is best pony!

229859 Oh FFUUUUUUUUUUUUdge monkeys!.... umm, I kinda forgot about that, after haveing been worried about that....

This was planed to be a one shotter but since people want more i may just add a new chappter, just one though most likely i have many other things i want to get to. Besides Pinkie exist in your hearts, not just here...and in real life if she somehow finds a way through.:pinkiehappy: I'll probably post a chapter on why pinkie gets so upset when people break a pinkie prommie.

...Prommie? ...yes, a pinke prommie. You've all been lied to, it's a prommie, not a promise. My flippin grammar...

228259 :pinkiehappy: I did! i recomended to him that he preread in that word thingie he has since his chrome spell check stinks.

Whoa! daring doo! Wait, Rainbow took the cider...

PIKIE*tries to tackle hug the pony but rams into his screen* ouch*rubs his head* Was hoping that would work. Darn it.

Pinkie I got to ask, where did you get gummy? and how did he lose his teeth? Also whats the flavor of his favorite punch? Does it require gummy to soak in it for it to taste the best?

pinkie can i has a hug? :ajsleepy: i need something to cheer me up

:pinkiesad2:, aww, comme here 258525 *wraps hooves around you*

258588

*hugs back* thanks pinkie :pinkiesad2:

258598 :pinkiesmile: Anytime. What's been getting at you?

258605

just random depression, i get that sometimes

:pinkiesmile:258612 Oh that stinks, Oh iknow what we shold do!

*fires pinkie cannon*

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