Just some random person on the internet that writes stories about a show with ponies. I try not to suck at writing. Am I good at it? I don't know. I just do it for fun.
Ever wondered why Trixie acted the way she did in Boast Busters?
This was an English assignment..my teacher asked for us to write about your favorite fictional character. She said to pick a character that you had felt the most sorry for. I felt sorry for Trixie, so I chose to write about her.
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First! And yay!
Now I'll start reading!
That was beautiful, though quite a few errors, but awe
some anyways!
A good story, though you may want to find a proof-reader for your stories, or double-check them. There are numerous errors. Also, one gigantic plot hole... why would Trixie say that she has no parents, when it is stated in the first paragraphs that she lost her parents in the crowd?
I'm sure your teacher appreciated this.
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She was bawling. Later, I showed her My Little Dashie..soon..she became a brony!!
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Lol. Awesomeness.
Wow... They really should make this sort of stuff canon
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You really think so?
415260 I've seen many fics like this. It's only a matter of time
aw man, this was an amazing thing, I'm usually not a big fan of the whole Trixie fics, but this one was awesome
Congrats that was beautiful.
It was a little rough around the edges in spots. But overall the story was very good! I enjoyed it! I like how you did the flashback scenes. It gave the events of "Boast Busters" a new perspective!
it's... beautiful....
not cannon acuracy, but it's fanfiction, so that doesn't neccesarally matter.
the ending for me was kinda fast too, but otherwise, i loved it. i give that... 4/5 mustaches and a trixie for the .5.
Not a bad read. That was a good way to explain twilight's attitude about showing up trixie in the show. And also makes good use of the rivalry between the two.
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Thank you. I kinda figured since the two are unicorns and they know magic, they would probably seen each other before and one time be friends.
Also, I would think there has to be a reason on why Trixie was acting like a show off and reacted they way she did when Twilight showed her up.
Thus, I made this fic!!
Wow, that was good.
Sad, but good
Impressive.
This was an enjoyable read, but I feel like the end was a little rushed compared to the rest of the story.
not bad. I always felt Trixie got majorly shafted in Boast Busters. She comes into town to perform a magic show and RD, Applejack and Rarity treat her like crap. Snips and Snails bring a friggin' Ursa Minor into town and it destroys her wagon and possibly/probably everything she owned. Oh, and even though she fought the damned thing instead of leaving, those three flankholes still act like jerkasses.
I don't even consider her to be an antagonist!
A new twist to an old story, It was a little stagnant at first, but got a bit better as I went on. Reading Trixie's past story was more enjoyable than replaying the current story, but I saw you did add a few things to the current story as well.
As for the writing itself, a few mistakes here and there and over use of the word "said" was spammed. You should add some action or description between dialogues to spruce it up. It makes conversations look more meatier.
Really nice!
530229 Just like with Mare-do-Well . "Remember kids if you feel good about yourself YOU WILL BE PUNISHED!"