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Saro0fdemonz
just another brony with random story ideas.
Saro0fdemonz
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Quite a few capitalization errors—beginning with the very first line. Every new sentence needs to begin with a capital letter every time. Also, so do the character names. Celestia's name is spelled with a lowercase letter at one point. I suggest you go back and look for these right away, but fix the first one at least immediately. People judge a work based on the smallest things, and having an error like that at the very beginning might make people shy away from reading it.
I very, very rarely read anything "shippy," and I don't even know why I clicked this. But, I did... and when I did I ended up reading the whole thing in one go. I like how Spike is reacting to Discord's crush, and how they are interacting. This has the makings of a great little story, and it has my upvote, so please check it over again.
6477303 Thanks. I am very much aware of many of the errors and do plan on fixing them. But I am running on...3 hours of sleep over the course of the past week running myself ragged. I am very happy that you actually read this and that your comment was polite about how poorly edited this is. I hope you enjoy future chapters
You sir have my attention. I have a weak spot for this ship.
6477485 It's one I've never tried before and I hope I can do it the justice it deserves.
I get the feeling this will be hilarious.
yay ^^ i will devinetly keep track of this
liked the first chapter so far :3
#DiscoLightOTP <3 <3 <3
6477485
me too haha
so i looked through your favs and found out that you havent read one of the best Discolight fics out there
its called "This Curel and Random World"
you really should check it out
its incredible ^^
and also thanks for faving "Rewrite"
im one of the authors of it ;3
um, Dissy dear, you know she can be bisexual..............or pansexual...............or heck, just about anything, you still have a chance!!
anything that can get Discord and
being bros I´M IN!!!
Discord
Yaaaaaay!
DiscoLight! Or whatever it's called now!
The ship that made me like ships! I mean, it's not at the top anymore (SUNLIGHT OTP) but I still love me a good DiscoLight! Can't wait!
Exclamation points!!1!!1!
6496771 Now, I don't mean to promise anything, but this is Story One in my Twicord/Discolight series. I have so many ideas and things I want to do. But its gonna be a little slow since I'm doing youtube and such at the same time as all of this and 6 other stories XD
Nice! I will be tracking this.
6497047 pay more attention to this story pls it is so hard to find a good discolight romcom nowadays
6717416 I AM working on it. But I am also working on a million other things along with it. This is actually the top third thing on my list of stuff to get done.
Personally, I'm a FlashLight shipper (I'm surprised that wasn't the crush Spike was mentioning), but I'll be checking the story out for the FlutterDash. I have to say though, I would've thought Rainbow was worried that Discord would do the opposite of 'help' with her proposal, considering the incident with Tree Hugger.
6721370 I have not watched the series beyond season 3. I sort of lost interest at that point but everyone keeps telling me to keep watching.
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Then how did you know about Twilight's new castle and Tirek's rampage?
6721559 because i was sent a link of that episode and told to watch it and to not question it.
please!Another chapter!I love it!
Love the story keep up the good work. ...don't kill any characters..….my life just can't take it anymore....u no wat do whatever u want. It will either way make me cry cause its an awesomeawesomeawesome!!!!! I cry on awesome stories...
6773629 I am in the process of writing 7 different stories at once. Though this is one I really want to update soon. As far as I can remember, there is no death of any kind planned at all for this story. Pretty sure its only meant to be a RomCom with feels and laughs.
YAY!!!!!!!
laughing makes me cry too!!!
What about Flash Sentry?
6780002 He has 6 scenes and no personality to build on because the fandom hates him. I'd have no idea where to start or even if I'd want to use him.
I loving where this story is going. Hope to see more of it soon. Keep Up The Great Work ! :-)
Loving this so far. When will I see more of this
7727225 When the seventh son is born of a seventh son
or whenever I have time for it
This has potential.
A nice start, but I noticed some minor errors. You might want to get a writing aid, like Grammarly, and go through what you have right now and what you can. Give it another read, it's been more than long enough since you posted the chapter you will probably be able to spot some of your errors on your own.
So when’s the next chapter?