Something has gone wrong with Discord's magic, And it's starting to cause chaos all over Equestria! Twilght has been giving then task of fixing this mess before it's to late...beacuse it seems to be affecting her in...different ways.
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I really like the idea behind this, but I think I should point you towards a proofreader or an editor. This group should help with that. I also noticed that you're fairly a newcomer, with your account being only two days old (although you could've been a lurker without an account like I was for awhile) maybe try reading the Writing Guide to get help with frequent fic mistakes. Also, remove the author's note on the first chapter before more people see it, or else you are gonna be TROOOOOLLED SO BAAAAD! Just a warning!
So that would be my two cents, use it or don't!
Edit: I'm giving you an upvote because the idea behind this is original and I really, really, really love your depiction of Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie.
Edit: Edit: Ok, Fluttershy more so!
lol, thanks for the advice. I'll check out the group and remove that note, Thanks for reviewing.
It says celestial instead of Celestia and is missing uppercase letters.
I like it so far but you need to edit it
3984905 Agreed. But I like this so far. Granny smith is so lonely
Th7s story has a good plot and if you use 7t correctly it could be amazing. Get a proof reader and add more chapters. A , ike and a fave you have earnt
hmmm.
I almost peed my pants laughing when he said "For moon-butt's sake!"
Hey? why don't they have any Luna faces on here?
CRAP This is good!!!!
I love the way you didn't rush into shipping like all the other writers! Please, come out with the next chapter soon! My companion and I can't wait!
I LOVE this!Just fix the grammar and spelling, and everyone would love it even more!!!
But really, I love this.
I lile the story, but there are a few grammar mistakes.
Nice ilike more MORE!
GET.....THE...NEXT....CHAPTER......OOOOUUUUTTTT!!!!!!!!
How? long? Must? I? Wait? To? Get? A? Decent ? 4th? Chapter? OUT!!!!???? MUST HAVE MORE!!!!!!!!!!
It's been...so long
I...love this story..so much....I....
ZzzZzzzZzzz...
Please post the next chapter I really enjoyed the story
This is a great story and I know your probably sick and tired of hearing this but please update I just can't wait for the next update.
I know I must have over 9000 comments here but really! When is the next chapter out?
GET THE NEXT CHAPTER OUT!!!!
This such an awesome story can't wait for the chaos to continue.
How long has it been since i was on this thing? A year a think. i dont know if you are even still active but if you are could you tell me? i really would like the next chapter out.
Omg I love this story so much. It makes me wanna hug Discord really bad... seriously I'm squealing and hugging my pillow right now. Oh and by the way you kind of spelled Celestia's name wrong* please don't get mad* it's celestia not celestial
Haha
Please continue
This has promise. Please, continue.
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❤It's a nice story, I like it, too bad it won't be finished🥺