After Discord messing and joking around with the Mane 6, he jokes some more. What he does is where he acts like he's going to fall in love with some pony, so he thinks of the Mane pony, that had trapped him himself....Twilight Sparkle. Discord soon goes to Twilight and takes it deeper and messes with her.
But Twilight might not love it.
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4536612
You missed capitals on 'american' and 'austrian', misspelled 'motherfucker' and left out a couple of 'the's in the first sentence.
Perhaps you could use an Austrian editor.
4536792 Correct me again and I shall return you to your mothers womb!
4536800
*Mother's
4536804 How dare you! When I find you, I shall rip you into halves! And I shall rip those halves into halves! And soon you will be in sixteenths! SIXTEENTHS!
4536809
I'll give no quarter!
4536612
Agreed.
Who removed my comment!? Author! Explain yourself!
Protip: Read your description out loud and tell me that it's written right. Also, capitalize your title properly as it's a big turn-off to many readers when that's not even done right.
In reply to the comment you deleted: when it comes to titles, all major words (in this case "mine") need to be capitalized. Anyone who's passed grammar school can tell you that.
4541427 I did capitalize my words. (Yeah I already know the description sucks.) But anyone who passed 3rd Grade would know that I made it capitalize.
4542048 Capitalization is defiantly not your only problem. Anyone who passed 3rd grade would have known that.
4548612 Yes, I did pass 3rd grade, end of sentence....
You know, it's really not that bad. With the huge number of dislikes this got I was starting to think it was bad clop that wasn't tagged right. With that said, I won't deny that an editor would greatly help you out. It's no Shakespearean play, but I've honestly read worst. The story is there, it's just worded a bit badly in some places. Well best of luck as they say.
Please continue the story I want t o know how this turns out.
next pls