• Member Since 29th Mar, 2013
  • offline last seen Jul 11th, 2016

Chloe The Great


BAD TOUCH!

T
Source

Twilight Sparkle never thought too hard on love and didn't really contemplate on her experience with romance. She begins to when a conversation with Rarity brings her to think about finding somepony special to love, changing her life résumé. There are complications, though, as she discovers the difficulty with herself and others of maintaining a relationship told to be better than the ones you have with friends. She's supposed to know when she loves somepony, right? The way they look at you, the way they act around you..? The signs become less clear and lines become blurred when Twilight seeks for the thrill of love.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 14 )

This sounds pretty interesting. I would very much like to read more of it.

6023777 YAY! Thank you, Dubs The Shnub!! :heart:

I think you should pace yourself a little more. Slow down and don't try to skip through the story

Hope you continue with this! :twilightsmile:

6027353 Oh, thanks, do you think there's anywhere I could improve on it..? :derpyderp2:

did you delete my comment?

6028109 No, I deleted the chapter where you had posted your comment. Sorry about that, I just figured combining the first two chapters would be better...:twilightsheepish:

6028128 well i couldnt read your answer on my comment tho

6028198 oh it just said some stuff on thanking you for being so nice and polite. thank you! :heart:

This is adorable :rainbowkiss:

6098829 Well, thank you, kind sir/madam! :heart:

plz make it A twicord :raritydespair:

I sympathize with her😁, in the first chapter they didn't say much between them😟, please in the future they have more contact with each other pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee🥺🥺🥺

Login or register to comment