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Saro0fdemonz


just another brony with random story ideas.

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With all the responsibilities of being a Princess, Twilight barely has time to be a mother. Normally she makes due, thanks to her excellent Scheduling prowess. But with the weight of the world on her back(in paperwork) she has no choice but to trust Rainbow to watch the kids for one.entire.day.

Inspired by this wonderful pic by the ever so amazingly talented CaptainPudgeMuffin
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Rated Teen for Slightly Mature topics

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 14 )

well you have my undivided attention keep up the good work.:twilightblush:

I say continue the story. It seems very interesting so far.

I was curious before but now you have my attention.:moustache:

So, who wears the pants?

Sorry, couldn't resist

"Please don't burn down the town?":duck: sounds like my little ones".
:moustache: "Have fun storming the castle!"
:twilightsmile: Are you part of the brut squad?
:rainbowlaugh: He is the brut squad!
:twilightoops: "The Princess Bride?"
:moustache::raritywink: "the kids love it".
:facehoof:

cute fluffy full of fun,:pinkiehappy:

What does the cover art have to do with foals?

7760668 Small things give me big ideas. I saw the picture and I just imagined Twilight scolding Rainbow about going out in the cold without proper clothing to keep her warm and how motherly she can be and it just spiraled from there.

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In terms of controlling the kids and the household - Twilight.
In terms of "which one be the daddy?" - Rainbow.

For several reasons both agreed upon. Rainbow being in the Wonderbolts didn't want to take time off her career to carry Foals and Twilight had the chance with most of her business being in the Castle and being able to ask her friends and Spike for assistance on matters that required being somewhere in person.

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As mentioned in the notes, this was just a little idea off the top of my head. I wasn't even sure if anyone would even like it! Seeing as people do seem to enjoy it I'll see what I can do to change things, but my schedule is just a tiny bit packed right this second.

Cute start to a cute story. You're missing some capitalizations, periods, and commas throughout the second chapter, though it didn't really take much enjoyment off of the fic itself. Looking forward to what happens next!

7763577 Wasn't aware that was a thing. I've seen it before. Thanks for the heads up! Also - Thanks for reading! This was just a made stroke of "write it, post it, before its gone!" kind of idea. I plan to fix it :rainbowlaugh:

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not entirely, im dealing with a lot in life right now. I do plan to finish this.

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