just another brony with random story ideas.
Rainbow Dash, calm, cool, collected, awesome. And apparently in love with Equestria's Number 1 Bookworm. Shenanigans ensue as Rarity and Applejack put on their shipping goggles with Pinkie carting in snacks from the sidelines. This tale contains luls, daws, and sadness.
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3981124 ...this story isn't even published. how did you get here?
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The Random-Number Gods helped me.
This was great.
Needs a little polish, but great so far otherwise. Fairly good pacing, bit of mystery with Scootaloo(though it's cliche enough we all know what's coming). Keep up the good work.
4557913 this is the Twidash Scootadopt story I owed everyone for 100 followers and never had a chance to get to. But I quit my job today so I had time to actually write and finally got it posted. Thanks for the constructive criticism, its rare these days I get someone who is polite about it.
4557650 I'm glad you like it.
4558067 well I don't like to be rude so I avoid like the plague. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Then shouldn't this have a sad tag?
3985100 that explains a lot, actually...
The overall story was pretty good, but there were a LOT of grammatical issues with this one. Especially with missing capitalization, run-on sentences, and forgotten or misused apostraphes. You definitely need an editor.
can't wait for the next chapter
4560856 I've been trying to get one but no one wants to bother.
4562479 I'll do it if you like.
4560439 its not SAD sad, its a tidbit of sadness and I didnt feel the sad tag would fit properly until I actual get around to that and see where its gonna go.
4568891 I'd appreciate that.
4568906 I will gladly do it! :)
When do you expect to be posting the next chapter? I would love to read it.
4596792 not sure really, but hopefully soon.
Great!! I can't wait! :) (couldn't find the regular smiles so I had to improvise.)
4599143
This is an amazing story! More?
while i admit that this intrigues me, i'd still love to see the original be continued at some point. maybe put this as a separate story?
4972119 the thing is, they both follow the same idea and both lead to something else I have written. I do plan on trying to put the original back together, but that requires quite a bit of free time. Something I am lacking of with the way my life is right now. But if more people agree then I'll do that.
It could fit in quite well with the original idea to give twilight a convenient reason to go into the relationship so I would LOVE to see this continued. But if you can dig up the original idea then that could be interesting too even though I don't know what was supposed to happen with it. So in conclusion I'm good with either one but the one that is the freshest in your mind and easiest to get out would be preferable.
I like it, seems like it would make for a good story. Hope you continue with this idea.
So... I think this thing needs a comedic tag. Also, there's a bit of "you're"/"your" confusion when sweetie was talking shortly after scoots fell on RD. The only problem i have is why did Twilight just so happed to be there when pinkie made her promise? Was she there because she, like RD, got too drunk to go home? In which case, it becomes unrealistic that Pinkie doesn't know who'e. Or was it some other reason? Cause I can't really think of a valid reason how Twi would be there without pinkie knowing.
5342158 I Honestly don't remember. This story got put off for quite a long time and I lost what I had for it. Which is why I have the alt storyline chapter and once I have the chance I am going to do the story using that. Thanks for pointing out the "your/you're" stuff though.
I'm interested in the new story. The old one was paced like a rushed one shot and the bit with the cmc didn't really catch me enough to expect another chapter. This has a nice, albeit a bit cliched, catch to it.
No further comments on grammar since I'm not particularly an expert myself.
Well I would love to see either of these storylines continued but at this point that seems unlikely. What is here piqued my interest though.