Dead Birds

by Stray Dog Kane

Some things never go away

(The note on the clock changed to a poem and a song)

"Twas brillig, and the slithy toves
Gyre and gimble in the wabe;
And mimsy are the borogoves,
And the mome raths outgrabe.

Beware the Jab-Jab-Jabberwock.
The Jubjub and the Bandersnatch!
Oh manxome and frumious
With the big claws that catch.

"Beware the Jab-Jab-Jabberwock,
That burbles in the tulgey wood!
With eyes of flame he whiffles up
Little girl who won't be good.

"He's here, he's there, he's everywhere,
So don't go out so uffishly
Look out! He may be hiding there:
Behind the Tumtum tree.

"He's in, he's out, he's all about,
He'll get you if you don't look out.
That whiffling, burbling Jabberwock
Beware the Jabberwock.

(And with that, the clock exploded. It’s hands falling to the ground as gears flew from the face.)
(Only mustard with fix that, but even hatters know that’s too silly!)

The end.

Comments

[Stray Dog Kane]

Ok, in the end this has less views that the other stuff I made. Most of which was crap. Clearly all headaches, trauma, re-writes, time, and effort wasn't worth it. Or maybe it never was, who knows? Know other stories do a lot better than mine for one reason or another. This feels pointless.

[Eraya silverwind]

Loved the story and I can't believe it doesn't have more likes. Liked and favorited

[Not_a_Brit]

This, this was a brilliant read. While I am sad to see how it has so little views, I am glad to have found this. While I may be 3 years late to the party, I can say that it was still fun. If you're still on this website, then I want to let you know that story you have written is brilliant, and that I hope that you can return to make more masterpieces like this.

I have geniunely never been more enthralled by a story like this has at any other times, the closest one that I could say that came to this would be the Metro series, and even then if i had to choose a favourite, it would be this.

Good luck on any future endeavours you make in the literary world.