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Stray Dog Kane


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After a string of bad luck, Gilda finds her way back to Ponyville, the last place she ever wanted to go. Will Fluttershy be able to help her, or is she a dead bird after all?

Story's AU. It was made back when it looked like Gilda was forgotten by the show.

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Chapters (55)
Comments ( 15 )

Putting down chapters pretty quick, so to speak. Kinda in a rush to get it out

Would you like more chapters? Views are pretty low, and comments non-existent.

Wrong tag, it should be Pinkie Pie instead of Diamond Tiara. :twilightsmile:

Is my story just boring? Like I may as well not have put any effort in it?

Wow, the View-Word Ratio is insane. You know what, I've seen this appear in the updates box a few times, I think I'll give it a go. See how it reads.

Dreaming of a total stranger as your Mother is really sad and pathetique Diamond. :facehoof:

This is about as far as I go on this story. I like it but it's just getting a bit too mind screwy for me. Also, I don't find anything funny, so this being a dark comedy doesn't work for me. I'm curious about how the story ends but that doesn't exist yet. Good luck on writing, I upvoted and hope you get more attention because I think this should be read by others, even if it's not completely turning out to be my cup of tea.

Distracted by that, and other musings, the griffon only just then noticed the small foal next to her.

Creepy clingy DT is cute though.

Ok, in the end this has less views that the other stuff I made. Most of which was crap. Clearly all headaches, trauma, re-writes, time, and effort wasn't worth it. Or maybe it never was, who knows? Know other stories do a lot better than mine for one reason or another. This feels pointless.

You are magnificent for writing all of this without feedback and encouragement, and just 8 upvotes. :twilightsmile:

Loved the story and I can't believe it doesn't have more likes. Liked and favorited

This, this was a brilliant read. While I am sad to see how it has so little views, I am glad to have found this. While I may be 3 years late to the party, I can say that it was still fun. If you're still on this website, then I want to let you know that story you have written is brilliant, and that I hope that you can return to make more masterpieces like this.

I have geniunely never been more enthralled by a story like this has at any other times, the closest one that I could say that came to this would be the Metro series, and even then if i had to choose a favourite, it would be this.

Good luck on any future endeavours you make in the literary world.

Comment posted by Kyo21943 deleted Jun 30th, 2020
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