Gilda is stuck down in a well, it gets better. My only question to you...does is make sense in context?
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In the short description, dragons, claim, and valuable are misspelled. In the description on the story page,you used scenes insted of sense. The chapter title should have It's instead of its.
And now, to look at the chapter itself...
Couldn't read it, too many typos and wrong words. Please proofread and reupload.
Can I get comments about something other than my poor grammar? Can I get comment about my other faults? Is my story bad, and why? Is it old tired news? Is it improper use of characters? Did someone else do this and do it better? I know its off, but is that the only reason given? If you are going to hate me then give me a proper reason why my story, not just its poor wording, is bad. It's all I ask, really. Is there anything else wrong?