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Obedience


My name is Dylan. That is all you need to know. I live in Singapore. That is all you need to know. I like ponies. That is all you need to know.

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Dillon Mane was an orphaned foal in the streets of Las Pegasus until he was adopted by top Changeling spy, Agent Cloud Haze. The Changelings moulded him to be the perfect mole in Celestia's magical land of Equestria. However, Dillon would soon discover the magic of friendship. Which side would he choose to take then? The dark creatures that feed off the love of others? Or the happy and kind citizens of the bright and magical Equestria? Here are the once secret report logs of Agent Dillon Mane.

lololol spy crab. Dillon likes spy crabbing in TF2.
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Author's note:
This story is written in the style of a diary, hence the rather short chapters. The first chapter is has been funnified! Hopefully the jokes actually work. They were meant to provide more infomation about Dillon Mane's personality and give a few laughs in the process. I promise there will be more jokes in the later entries :) .

The city of Las Pegasus has been mentioned by Rainbow Dash in an episode of MLP: FiM and I decided to make it a ponified gangster infested Las Vegas. Therefore, I cannot claim the name "Las Pegasus" as my creation.

Lol just thought a disclaimer would make the thing 20% cooler. Oh well, enjoy the story! /)(^3^)(

The custom images were created in General Zoi's Pony Creator.

The story is rated 'Teen' because of reference to gangs, casinos, mafia and police street fights. But personally I think that its a fact we have to face. These things exist. I think that the young ones should know that the place we live in is no Heaven. But what can we do about it? We have to face it. Its a fact.

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 12 )

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nice job, try find a picture to suit this story :pinkiehappy:

634371 Thnx! It looks like I've been getting quite good responses for my first story. :rainbowkiss:
Brohoof? /)

I love the "why am I still writing this" at the end, you sir, are a funny man

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Nnnope. :eeyup:
I didn't watch Doctor Who. But Wikipedia said that humanoids have been able to operate Dalek shells. Why not equines? lololol

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Killing the Dalek seems... a little too violent for this fic don't u think? Moreover, how will Dillon kill it? With a pie? In a future chapter, I will go on about the side effects of the tranquilizing serum. After all, they said it was EXPERIMENTAL. We'll see what happens to that Dalek then. Hehe :rainbowdetermined2:


Oh, and about approaching the Dalek. I thought like, maybe it was busy exterminating the tree (failed attempt at killing Fluttershy lol) and our hero, being trained from his time as a foal into a spy, could have moved like, really quietly.

654405 It was a really super high voltage stun gun from the future. Who knows?
Perhaps I should edit that chapter a little. Thanks!

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