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FlareGun45


Let's see what we got here.... OJ, Soda Pop, Purple Stuff, Sunny D.... *BOP* Coulda had a V8!

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This story is a sequel to The Friendship Mafia


The Friendship Detection Agency, or FDA for short, is an elite corp of agents that go around Equestria to solve friendship problems that do not require the Elements of Harmony. The FDA uses reason and patience to solve mysteries and anything evil or chaotic that goes on around Equestria and bring more friendship and peace to the streets and the land. They also rival another agency in Equestria known as the DIF (Disharmony Investigation Force); an agency that is similar in every way, but the only difference is that the DIF uses discipline and try to create friendship and peace by force because they believe disharmony won't listen to reason.

A local Mareami pony known as Jerry Jam, who comes from a rich family that pays no attention to him or his sister, hangs out with low-class thugs for fun and go on heists because he thinks he could. When problems occur, Jerry realizes the error of his ways, and also blames his parents for not raising him right, and he wants to fix the sins and disharmony he caused by handling crime and disharmony in Equestria.

If you read my main story Friendship is Epic and/or my other spin-off The Friendship Mafia featuring Herb Leafhorn, well this story focuses on another FiE character, an FDA agent known as Jerry Jam who debuted on Flare's Backstory - Part 1 in FiE Book 2, and wasn't clearly known until Daring Do: The Motion Picture in FiE Book 3. Much like the Friendship Mafia, I want you to get to know this character because he's going to be playing major parts in future FiE chapters; probably is going to be close to the protagonist spot, much like Herb Leafhorn. This story contains more violence and more of a realistic theme, which is why it's T rated. Anyways, enjoy! Brohoof! /)

Characters:

Jerry Jam: The protagonist of the story. Comes from a wealthy family; the Jams own the land of Mareami, and are also the ones that broke up the conflict between the Guns and the Leafhorns when they thought they owned the land. Jerry is an intelligent and athletic pony that uses his talents for the wrong reasons. He wishes to fix the error of his ways by joining the FDA, and bring peace to Equestria. Jerry is also good at writing.

Jelly Jam: Jerry's sister. A sarcastic, but kind sister that Jerry tells his secrets too because Jelly and Jerry only have eachother because their parents are too busy to worry about them.

Orange Swirl: One of Jerry's best friends and criminal crew members. He has that South LA 'hood' attitude and personality. He is also loyal, but not very tolerable towards those he finds annoying.

Cesaer Salad: Another of Jerry's best friends and criminal crew members. He has more of a 'Mexican-cartel' attitude and personality. He is also dependent but stubborn.

General Lee: A carriage stuntspony, and also the driver and hacker to Jerry's crew. He is hated by Jerry's friends, and Jerry gets pretty annoyed by that. Lee is a professional when it comes to electronics and pulling carriages. There hasn't been a cop chase yet that he's been defeated in.

Elusive: A homosexual night club owner, and is also a cousin of Rarity. As an undercover job for the FDA, his job is to be the bodyguard and assistant manager for Elusive and his clubs in Las Pegasus.

Merry May: One of Jerry's agent partners in the FDA. She is intelligent and athletic just like him, but probably even more than him. Her undercover job is being a worker at the Cloudsdale Weather Factory, but at the same time, she has a second job as a national flower deliverer with Ponyville's local flower shop - Daisy, Rose, 'n Lily Valley.

Apple Fritter: One of Jerry's agent partners in the FDA. Her most usefulness in the agency is creating disguised gadgets, such as an apple fritter with a spy-camera inside. Her undercover job is cooking apple baked goods at Appleloosa's bakery.

The Director of the FDA: Otherwise known as Princess Celestia's alternate-ego. She is in charge of giving agents mission for the field. She keeps her voice and identity as a secret to the newcomer agents, but her waving hair kinda gives it away.

Crimson Flare Gun: A pony that Jerry sees getting picked on alot at school. He and Herb are one of the main reasons why Jerry wants to stop violence and bring more harmony to Equestria. Flare's the protagonist of his own fanfic: Friendship is Epic.

Herb Leafhorn, Jr.: The pony that Jerry sees picking on Flare at school. He and Flare are one of the main reasons why Jerry wants to stop violence and bring more harmony to Equestria. Hey didn't I just say this? Herb's the protagonist of the other spin-off fanfic: The Friendship Mafia.

Agent S: The director of the DIF. A very mysterious individual that keeps his identity a secret very well. Nopony knows if he's even a pony or not.

Snake Eyes: An agent for the DIF. A corrupted agent that tries to be the best agent he could be for the agency by solving more cases than any of the other agents, including stealing missions from the FDA. He has a slight snake accent, and he has a lazy eye.

Eclipse Norton: An agent for the DIF. A calm agent that just wants to get the job done without too much hassle. He likes sucking on candy canes on his free time, and his main post is being a Witness Protection Agent.

Chapters (15)
Comments ( 4 )

Merry May is best BG pony! :heart:

Ooooh. Just found this story and already reading the title and desc sounds interesting.

6402947 Nice! I hope you read the Friendship Mafia and Friendship is Epic later when you have the chance! They connect! And please enjoy! :D

Ok that last guy that just disliked - you didn't even read it! I just uploaded the chapter literary 30 seconds ago. That's just pathetic, friend! :rainbowlaugh:

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