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"A new world awaits for you... A new beginning... With infinite possibilities... Until all six are united as one..." - Death

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This story is a sequel to Fanning Our Flames


Ever since she was a little filly, Sunset Shimmer has always wondered why her real family abandoned her at the orphanage. She'll learn the truth about what really happened as she is hunted down by an assassin who holds the secret about her family.


This story is part of The Shimmerverse.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 7 )

Good start on this story.

but as they entered they found Spike encased in ice with a look of terror. :rainbowlaugh: I can totally see the Shimmerverse version of Sunset doing that.

Good work, I notice a couple of spelling errors.

This was the first time they've been on an airship, but it was still incredible nonetheless.

I think you meant,

This wasn't the first time they've been on an airship, but it was still incredible nonetheless.

before our queens might.

before our queen's might.

I'm kind of surprised this didn't get more attention. This is done rather well and you've got all the characters spot on. Keep up the great work. :twilightsmile: And I hope it works out in the end.

7693369 Thanks I appreciate it, although I'm a bit stuck at the moment, but I hope to get out of this soon so I can continue this story.

Great work, sorry tat I didn't read this sooner.

The events of this one you tell the history it is before To Fear To Predator?

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Yes that's right it is before.

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