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Chivalry


Big Mac is Watching

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“Light thinks it travels faster than anything but it is wrong. No matter how fast light travels, it finds the darkness has always got there first, and is waiting for it.”
- Terry Pratchett

Ever since she had gone into the ancient castle in the Everfree Forest, Twilight has been suffering from these strange, vivid nightmares about a young filly. Since these dreams began, she has been bed ridden and Spike has been helping her through it. After one extremely terrible night, Spike sends a letter to Princess Celestia begging for assistance. What he learns and what he experiences from that moment on will forever change his perspective of the world around him. And who knows, maybe he will make a new friend along the way.

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Thanks for Reading! Click the "Like" button if you liked the chapter, click the "Favorite" button if you want more of this story, click the "Watch" button if you want more from me, and leave a comment telling me your worst nightmare/night ever!

I would say bless your faces at this point, but that would be redundant considering you are the internet and have no face! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_crazy.png That's right, I'm onto you...

Sorry! Sorry! That was the insomnia talking :twilightblush:

No final says from me eyt to;; ,pre cp,es BUT you got me so far so keep up the gppd work. :pinkiesmile:

May a gentle breeze guide your path and a ever warm smiles keep you in joy. :twilightsmile:

Great story, I really love your Spike/Twilight dynamic, definitively looking foirward to the rest of this. One thing though, the chapter says "Hush now, quite now", instead of "Hush now quiet now" in the story overview, just a little heads-up.

Seething slightly, Spike shook the molten liquid off his tail and rubbed the area lightly, trying to stop the dull throbbing emitting from the point of contact.

Was the hot milk frozen before?:rainbowderp:
Also, interesting story. I'm eager to find out who "she" is.

Poor Twilight. :fluttershysad:
This is a pretty good build up. The description was brilliant and now I must know what happens!
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Very interesting.
I'm a little confused, the main character is Spike and the story will be shown from his view? dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_TwilightWut.png

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Judging by how he used spike and mane 6 tags, yes.
There is far to few spike stories out here that does NOT involve clop :twilightangry2:

Author, get your quill ready. i demand MOAR :raritycry:

Heh, I would demand more but I see that it has already been ordered.

Anyway, this story shows promise, especially after reading it for the third or so time.

I look forward to seeing where you go with this, unless I already know for some reason then I look forward to seeing what you do with it.

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Thank you for the well-wishes!
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Thanks for pointing it out and I will change it once I get back to my dorm. Editing stories on an iPhone is difficult.
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What do you mean?
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There will be more coming, but please be patient. I only get to write on the weekends!
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The point of view will mostly come from Spike with a few minor jumps to other characters like Twilight and Luna later on. Also, I too am preterbed by the lack of Spike fics that do not involve clop. It's upsetting, really.
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Yes!
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Trust me on this one, you don't know what's going to happen. Also, when am I going to get that next chapter of OoD?

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You are right. It is the charracter in MLP that it's least likely to get in that kind of situations yet you CONSTANTLY find him in them when it comes to fanfiction. Seriously, it's like they forget that it is child pornography :applejackconfused:

1515993
Pretty soon actually, I'd give it about another day so that I can make sure I have everything like I want it.

1515993
Well, for one, you can't melt liquid (unless it's in solid form). Anyway, I'm just nitpicking.:twilightsheepish:

I guess someone's a toby turner fan??? Anyways, I'm really excited for the next chapter :)

This looks like it's going to be good. Keep it up!

1518980 Lol. Molten =/= melting. Molten = lava-ish. :pinkiecrazy: :raritywink:

Well written, original, and scary. You've got a good story going. Thumbs up and a favorite, keep up the excellence pal!

Oh, I meant to point out the title of your chapter says quite but I think you meant quiet?

At first I was like :rainbowhuh: and then I saw the pic and was like:rainbowlaugh:

Before I begin to read I need to know: Is this a Spilight story?

Comment posted by Chivalry deleted Jan 7th, 2013

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Spike will NOT be paired with Twilight or any mares older than he is. While I cannot reveal everything on whom he will be meeting, I can say that there will be no make-out scenes with the YOUNG dragon. While he is a year older in this fic compared to the show, he is still a child by pony standards, and a young child by dragon standards, no matter what the mustache says :moustache:

While the story is A Work In Progress *bu-dum tss*, I have the basic groundwork laid out and there is some direction, but as with all of my stories, it is destined to change as I see fit.

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What took you so long? I still don't know what in f&#! the mustache joke is suppose to mean.
I'm not going to read it anyway. After a while I've come realize that there are no good "Tragic" labeled stories on this fandom.

Yes Spike y young indeed. So? That didn't stop Arwen to fall in love with Aragorn, who was more than 2500 years younger than she. :yay:

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In regards to the tragic tag, if you've read Becoming Whole, the tragic tag is more for overcoming tragedy, not the event itself.

And for the LotR romance you mentioned, he was a MAN. Clearly over 18 years of age, the legal age of consent. Unlike Spike

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The LotR was a joke, more tha anything else. I get your point and it's all right.
I'm still not going to read it. But I'm still wating for Becoming Whole's chapter 7.

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You people are like a dog with a bone :pinkiehappy:

Hmm seems nice and there are all sorts of routes you can take for this story considering this whole nightmares situation. I sense potential

CDR

Hey, fruitloop. Update this please. KthxBYE.

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You do understand what calling someone a fruit-loop means, right? In short, it is not a good way to motivate someone to do something you want.

Once I finish up Becoming Whole, I plan on turning my attention to this story and take a break from my others

CDR

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It either means I called you crazy or something else. I prefer silly though. Because its silly you haven't updated this yet. (Yes I'm horrible. Kill me later.)

ONWARD MY FRIENDS! TO MORE PONY!

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