After Nightmare Night, Luna realizes that there is still ponies who disrespect her and her night. After many consecutive ponies showing Celestia more respect than her will she be tempted to cause Daylight's End? This time once and for all?
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Heavy weapons will NEVER make something that is pointless!... Wait...
Will read later, looks promising.
Do go on.
Based off that song, and I only discovered it two days ago? Youre awesome Heavy!
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Must have been Bluebloods ancestors That got Luna over the edge 1000 years ago
Any I like and fav. Hope to see more soon
For those who havn't heard this song already.
Me likely.
EDIT: Silly me, I didn't see the little link you made already! Sorry Heavy... I am sooo stoopid
Wow. You were really inspired by that video, weren't you?
Silly author, you can't link your own story in the cover's sourcepage...
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You have my attention.
proceed!
Forgive me, I always sucked at writing long chapters.
no worries cant wait for the next chapter though.
cheers
woah
well, as they say, 3rd times the charm and with that said, my fave pony has won
now to see how her rule plays out
Well shit. Some on end blueblood now.
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I feel like this is my most liked story.
Thank you all so much
1661029 What do you mean?
good chapter I loved that you corrupted twi rather than killing her. hopefully twi can come around in spirit as well to join luna's cause.
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Wow. Just.... Wow.
1688672 uh.. I can't tell what you mean by that
Two chapters in one day? You good sir must be on fire!
This is getting creepy!
cool! but creepy.
DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUUUUNNNNNN
Geting good!
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This is good
keep it going It is impressive that the pony's under nightmares control still have their personalities.
Just a side question though is this going to be a Moonlight ship?
also I think the reason the nightmare kept twi on her side rather than killing her was because twilight was the nicest pony she ran into of that age. Just a theory.
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Perhaps..
Secondly, You got part of it, She was the nicest pony she met in that age but she would also prove to be a powerful ally if loyal to her.
1788632 so that's a double plus.
still can't wait for the next chapter. it is going to be awesome.
sounds good the next chapter will be interesting however the action feels a bit rushed but that's all i'm saying. cheers
The great shitstorm of our time has begun
So, using moon as a meaning to spread a spell across the land? Sounds familiar...
Cue invasion music.
(Joke) Alt. Title: Moonlight's End: A Tragesadark Fiction
chapter length doesn't matter as long as what you write is good. and believe me you wrote good. maybe faster paced than peppy greyskull but that doesn't really matter. it is still a good story.
cheers
Mixed feelings. Not in a bad way; there were just so much sadness, feels, and anger, I don't know what to feel.
Yay new chapter. A few missing words and gramma error here and there but overall a great chapter
Hows the new picture?
well oh come on like really cel stupid mare could have helped but no as usual cel sits on her as and doesnt do shit
luna is still in control kinda a bitch at the moment but still in control none the less.
personally i would have killed blueblood but i guess eternal night works two this aint going to end well.
but as they say if your going to do something you better do it without regret atleast until you win then you can regret your actions.
oh come the fuck that was cold ice cold.
sorry luna but right know i hate you so much.
great story but wow just wow
wow wow what she talking about that wasnt loyalty that was just a souless twilight following orders of the person controling her its not like she had any say in what she does for the most part
kinda sad really also this whole take your soul thing isnt going to end well since they dont truly love her or like her there just empty puppets and not even the good kind
wait is her soul in her again or what so fucking confused on so many levels and most are not in a good way im happy that shinings wife or was it girlfriend dont know if the wedding happend but anywho.....
puppys... thay is all for know
again fuck someone get the dragons involved in this battle also wheres spike like really.
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Not that I mind at all of course
i have the game bladestorm its awsome
1953778 i dont know sometimes i dont got much to say other times i do im crazy like that
very nice story and very well written chapter keep up the good work
While there is nothing incredibly wrong with this story, there is also not much in it that's good. The problem is that this is just too simple. There is hardly any description, the characters and there dialogue are barely developed, and the pacing is much too fast. The underlying structure and concept are good, but you need to flesh it out.