He never saw it coming. The glaring high beams and blaring honking wasn’t enough, and it never would be.
Marcus thought this would be the end, that he would finally have a place. But fate…well, it’s pretty finicky, especially when it comes to death.
Speaking of Death, there she is.
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She wants what?!?! Infinity stones?! In exchange for what?!
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Well now she’s got Marcus’ attention.
Inspired by Harmony Charmer's The Cake Batter Incident
Special Thanks to Wolven5 & Unamusedwaffle for Editing.
Cover Art made by MCShelster
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Chapters (15)
good start, looking foward to reading this more!
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Thanks :)
LETS GOOOOOOOOOOO
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YEAHHHHH!!!
An interesting start. A bit trope-y, but well written with plenty of room to grow. I can't wait to see where this goes.
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Glad you like it so far, there is more to come soon:)
Does anyone else wants the other chapters he claimed to have written previously to just be released at once
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I'll be posting them one at a time :) Until then, wait patiently for more my friend.:)
pretty good, i'll keep an eye on this
The story is not necessary new, but, the writing is very good I want to read it anyway :D.
Poggers
Truck kun strikes again
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Well said
interesting story
so far this is a good story
good chapter
Happy Birthday!!
Also great chapter!
When you have someone thinking, it's usually best to put it in italics so people recognize it's thought. Like this;
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That is very weird, I know I italicized the thoughts like I usually do. Don't know why they ended up like that. Thanks for letting me know.
Happy Birthday! I am enjoying this so far. Also, what happened to the steaming bowl of soup and freshly poured brew from last chapter?
Goddammit Rainbow Dash...
Nice
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About to start reading this, seeing good reviews in the comments, am hyped!
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I'll not complain about a longer update schedule, I understand wanting your work to be if not perfect, feeling content with it. With that said, can't wait to see what you do next. Your OC isn't just a flat Gary stu, so it's already a huge improvement over a lot of stories.
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My exact reaction as well
so. how in heck did sombra get tame? am i missing a chapter or smth
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He was introduced in chapter two as a sort of like "in the process of being reformed" villain in Pinkie's care. Though, I don't think we've been given an origin on how that happened yet
I have the gut feeling Sombra has one of the stones which is why he is around early.
Omg, finally the chapter is here. And it's worth it
oh that last part is a nice little cliffhanger wonder how long she has had that stone
I really don't like this Fluttershy, she just hit and scream, as if coal is her foal or brother, Pinky's been a better host than Fluttershy.
Uh... Chevrolet doesn't make the Accord. Honda does.
Well, I'm certainly intrigued! Finding the first stone was maybe a little rushed, it would have been better to split it into two chapters, but it's still really nice. The art is also a VERY good point!
On a side note, I'm not sure we had a description of his cutie mark? Does he even have one?
Is this dead, or am I just getting paranoid
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No it is not dead, I'm on hiatus for another month or so. There are things I need to take care, but I promise more is coming soon my friend. :)
Ah yes, a writer of culture I see.
ya, My boy needs to really get a level up in the skill department. One infinitely stone is bad enough Give it to an alicorn which already gives him some power he could have messed with space to make it some Any possible attack never has a chance to hit him but to be fair that might not work against the time stone.
well the MC doesn't seem like a bad guy at all so it seems understandable this would end with a little talk no jutsu instead of him doing something like locking up the space into something like a sure-hit domain and hitting her at every possible point (still might not work)
Can't wait for him to battle other Stone Wielders. But Coal was not using the Space Stone efficiently because if he was he could have created an infinity corridor around his body so none of Faerie's could hit him or teleport her heart out of her body for an instant kill though Coal does not seem the type to go for lethal moves unless it is a last resort
Uh, I think something is missing here.
I liked this chapter a lot Obsidian had some personal growth this chapter, I dunno why but all I'm able to picture is some kinda training montage where he stares at the stone with a constipated look for ages and gets nowhere.
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Weird? It looked fine in my Google docs. Might have accidentally uploaded it before I finished. Well, either way, I fixed it. Thanks for letting me know.
Ohh Fluttershy is going to be jealous.
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Most definitely xD
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Well he doesn’t know much about the stones and their capabilities. He was even called an amateur in the middle of the fight implying his lack of experience with it
I feel you stay strong brother the emperor protests
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Seconded. It's extremely odd with zero explanations as to why, so far anyway.
What I really enjoy about this is it’s hard to write a serious Pinkie Pie love story so you hardly see any of them. Sure you’ll see a clop fic here or there, but it’s hard to find a fic where Pinkie’s in a serious relationship and still remains true to her character. This story does it so well as well
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Thank you, that's something I really wanted to try and change since Pinkie is always getting the short end of the stick when it comes to romance.
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Well so far so good, you definitely deserved all those featured tags. I wouldn’t be surprised if this becomes as famous as say the story, “Past Sins”
Edit: I just realized looking at the new art and remembering something that happened in the last chapter I think I might have just figured out where another stone may be. I could be wrong, but I’m guessing the author may be knowing what I’m talking about if I’m not.
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Thanks for the kind words :)