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FlareGun45


Let's see what we got here.... OJ, Soda Pop, Purple Stuff, Sunny D.... *BOP* Coulda had a V8!

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Are you feeling that MLP: Season Six is taking forever to come? Well you may not have to worry! I have made a little something that MIGHT help stall the stress of the hiatus. Most of these episode names came from the fake 4chan list before it was taken down, so I decided to take advantage over it. This isn't much. I'm not trying to become famous over this story. I want to help out the fandom by giving them a fanmade season six to help them get through the hiatus - or it's a little something to do if you're bored.

For those of you that read my other stories, let me let you know that this story is beyond anything I've ever written. I don't put any of the humor or ANY content from my other stories in here. I want to keep this story as realistic to MLP as possible. Some events might cause characters to be OOC by accident, but that's not my intention. I'm really trying to entertain you with my theories of season six. I don't expect much to come outta this. Just your entertainment.

So mainly this story is about where we left off in season five where Starlight Glimmer becomes Twilight's new student. If you like Starlight, she'll be appearing alot in here! And alot of your favorite characters are in here! All of the main characters will have at least two episodes starring them, Starswirl the Bearded will be playing a major role in this story, new characters, a ton of returning fan-favorites, and my personal favorite: alot of character development for my little buddy Spike! Probably a little too much character development for him.

So please, enjoy the story! Also, I did not take any content from Hasbro or DHX that's relevant to the new season! So if there's a slight possibility of the events of the story appearing in season six, it would just be a coincidence. If teasers or sneak peeks get released while this story is being made, they will not be in here, because this is my season 6 with content I made, not content the writers made for the new season. So that's pretty much it! Just enjoy it, and if you have any questions whatsoever, feel free to PM me! Brohoof! /)

A new chapter will be released every Saturday, just like the show! That way if you so happened to enjoy this, you can enjoy it slowly and surely! ^_^ Story will be on hiatus after chapter 13, the halfway point, because I'm still making the chapters, but alot of chapters were already made ahead of time.

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Seems intriguing, I'll look at it when I have the time.

I'd love to read it, but I actually have to wait because (believe it or not) I'm also writing a fake fan-season. Mine might come out after season 6, if it's really as soon as April, but the first draft if just about done (mine's only thirteen episodes, and sort of follows a story-arch all throughout). I'm excited to read yours, but I really don't want to steal anything, even unintentionally, so I'll have to come back when I'm done.

I really hope there aren't too many similarities, and the reason I'm especially worried now is that Starswirl the Bearded plays an important part in my season, as well. I've been writing this since November, so I never could've (or would've) stolen the idea of a fan season from you. But, since no two writers write the same story the same way, hopefully even with the similar elements and structure, we can both post our stories without too much overlap.

6843830 You make a good point. I haven't read yours yet. But wow, great minds think alike don't they? Best of luck with your season! Give my pal Spike a good chapter. :moustache:

i like it and i can't believe princess twilight sparkle big brother and his wife keep their newborn foal in a box all alone that is mean

6843884 They have their reasons, even though they might not be good reasons. They're new being parents, so they're worried and don't know what to do.

6843896 ok and i am glad that their duagther isn't in the box all alone any more

6843844 Thanks! And I definitely will, I love the little dude!

Two pieces of advice first. One thing, don't capitalize the Jack in Applejack. It's all one word, and looks bad otherwise.
And the second could just be a personal thing, but the tense you're writing in feels a little bit strange. I'm not an expert writer (far from it), but it might be that you aren't writing it correctly, or that I'm just used to past tense.

But awesome story, I threw it a like and am now tracking it. :pinkiehappy:
If I do ever write my own Season 6 opener, don't kill me if it has Skyla in it. :twilightblush:

6844354 No you're right. You see, I'm a great story-teller. I make great stories, and I execute them pretty good, but my narration is far from perfect. That's one of the main problems of my stories. I don't have the best grammar, and when I type stories, I normally type them in a sense that's between a book and a movie script. As for Applejack, I type '''AppleJack''' like that for so long that I can't do it any other way. But perhaps I can try to control it. I already got chapters 3-10 finished, but perhaps from chapter 11 on forward I could try to type Applejack the way everyone is used to.

Regardless, thank you so much for the like, regardless of my few flaws! :pinkiehappy:

Are you using the episodes titles from the "Waiting for Season 6" group?

6844623 I never even heard of that group. :rainbowwild: No, I'm using the episode titles that someone from 4chan made. Everyone thought it was legit but it was confirmed fake by someone in DHX. I thought those were good names, so I wanted to take advantage over it. It started off as summary ideas I made, and then I decided to make a full story over it. :rainbowkiss:

Here is the link to the group: Waiting for Season 6 in the forums I created a topic where we can create our own episode summaries based off that list please take a look when you have the time and if you like you can add your own summaries if you wish to sort of like making it a episode guide.

Thank you so much everyone for enjoying it! The next chapter will be out next Saturday - random time! :pinkiehappy:

6861449 Skyla is actually the name of a toy alicorn Hasbro sold to some stores that sell toys, so I named this Skyla after that one. People keep saying that she might be Shining and Cadance's daughter.

The only reason Starlight wasn't summoned by the map was the she does not represent any of the elements of Harmony. The map only summons the bearers of the elements.

“Sorry, Rarity. As gorgeous and tempting as you look, it’s not going to work this time.” Spike said. Rarity was shocked, and Spike realized how shock she was. He smiled at her and said, “But you were so close, I will give you that much, Rarity.”

Rekt!

“Uh, thanks?” the bodybuilder said awkwardly. “By the way, umm, no offense, but I was… actually talking to that cutie behind you.”

Rarity was really getting roasted this episode! :rainbowlaugh:

“Maybe you don’t have to.” Sunburst said as he walks into the library. Starlight gasped in shock after seeing him.

I can just imagine Sunburst running after them, but just missing the train, and having to hang on for dear life all the way back.

Plus, making up songs isn't always easy, especially if I take a break in the middle of them, but I really liked the results of this song! It kind of shared a similar style to the song Jeopardy by Greg Kihn Band.

For me, this song totally reminded me of On The Run from Steven Universe (putting it below just for reference).

Anyway, great chapter! I can't wait for next week's one. Buuuut... do you think you'll even have enough time to air all of them before Season 6 starts? A lot of people (and me!) are thinking it may start this spring or summer. If it does, will you continue the story as usual or will you adjust scheduling?

6864753 Well even though the date is rumored to be this spring or summer, it's not confirmed, unfortunately. Hopefully I'll have the will to make more chapters even if it does air. I already have up to chapter 11 finished, and I'm working on chapter 13 right now since 12 is a little difficult to make.

If the season 6 premiere date is coming sooner, I'll probably have to release more chapters per week. Or I can just keep going on the regular schedule and skip the hiatus after chapter 13 (even though I might not need it anyway after how fast I'm going, finishing one chapter per week).

But anyways, thank you for enjoying the story! We have a CMC chapter next week, but that's all I'm going to say. :ajsmug:

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Comment posted by Ellington deleted Jan 24th, 2016

6844354 MegaSean's not the only one who types AJ in that way, I do too.

So since the real season 6 is coming sooner, I've decided to post TWO chapters today! :pinkiehappy:

6887728 When is it starting?

6887881 Spring sometime. People are saying April, but that's not confirmed yet. All we know is it's sometime this Spring.

A flashback begins with Silver Spoon at the china shop runned by her mom

Don't you think it should be run?

6888092 Doesn't sound right to me, but fixed.

Your stories are amazing, but you should work on the title of the made up Season 6 title.

6888529 Well if anyone has a better title suggestion, feel free to PM me!

“Oh, but… that would be lying.” Fluttershy said as she holds onto her tail.
“Uh, we’re Elements of Loyalty and Kindness, Fluttershy. AppleJack’s honesty.” Fluttershy reminded her.
“Oh… right.” Fluttershy understood.

I think the bold part's supposed to be Dashie.

6894098 Fixed. Thanks for your help! I really gotta spot these better during my proof-reads. :rainbowwild:

6888247 Not sure too, but I'm sure its not runned. That's not even a word!

Ahhhhhh! How can there be six up there already? I'm not even done with Chapter One! I seriously need to catch up! Hopefully I can get some time later today when I'm not busy writing my story or going out.

It's actually delegate, not delicate. But anyways, Great Chapter! I never actually thought about a princess episode, and especially a one in which Celestia would learn a lesson.
You should actually send you stories to Hasbro or something, maybe they'll use it as a future reference!

6909773 I would send this to Hasbro, but they're not allowed to listen to the creative minds of the fandom. Why? Because they're afraid of being sued. The closest thing I'm hoping for is that DHX would accept internship. I'll have to ask.

Sassy sighs as she walks back stage so she herself can prepare for the final round. When Sassy upsettingly walks back stage, she sees an empty soda cup rolling across the floor. “Huh?” she asked.
She curiously walked deeper back stage and observed to see if there was anything out of the ordinary. “So… this is what you wanted, huh? To be a big winner?” a voice from the shadows asked.

I have to point out how creepy that was. :pinkiecrazy:

Great chapter (and a long one too). what's the next title?

So... do you have this planned out, or are you taking requests?

6931752 I have it planned, but I could take suggestions on certain things. I rather have them PM'd to me though.

I'm getting alot of favorites, but not enough people are liking it. :fluttercry:

6931586 The next one is Apple Family Recipe! :pinkiehappy:

It's... uh... bold of you to "fill in" for the upcoming Season 6, but here we are dealing with hungry bronies and I have no idea if their hunger's hunger is a hunger that can be filled.

Hear that, bronies? Come at me and give me another negative mark because everything Black Kyurem says is trash! Nyah nyah! :pinkiecrazy:

6932187 Aren't favorites more flattering?

>> MegaSean45 What next chapter are you going to do?

Very different chapter than any of the others in the story.

“Hopefully it does.” Rainbow mumbled to Big Mac.
“Ugh!” Big Mac groaned.
“Whoa! What’s your problem?” Rainbow asked. “Are you ok, Big Mac?”
“Yes.” Big Mac said.
“Huh?” Rainbow asked.
“Ah mean… umm… eeyup.” Big Mac said nervously.
“Hmm… ok then.” Rainbow said awkwardly.

I knew it right then that this couldn't be Big Mac, and it had to be a changeling.

Chrysalis started to feel less angry and in power, and she started to feel actual emotion. “You… you’ll actually do this?” she asked. “You’re volunteering to save our race, even though we’ve captured you from your home and away from your family?”

I had a feeling of reformation right there, glad I wasn't right.
Anyways, great chapter, and as GuineaPig said, a very different chapter indeed. But I am sick of Starlight appearing in each and every chapter/episode.

This was a good chapter, but different from the others.
Also, I like Starlight, but I really don't think she would know more about friendship than the Mane 6. They have been learning about friendship since at least two years, while Starlight has just started. I was hoping for Applejack to get a bigger role because obvious reasons, but Starlight kinda got most of the attention.
Enough with the negatives, now let's see the positives! The chapter had a good amount of humor that didn't distract from the main story, your descriptions were vivid and made it easy to mentally picture what was happening, Granny Smith and the Apple clan has a big role, and you found a good way to put Kevin in there. And Applejack's left hoofed (hooved?)! Lefties unite! :ajsmug: I'm glad you didn't really reform Chrysalis (one of the best villains) but you still managed to make her less of a threat.
So overall, good chapter but Most Excellent Princess and Starlight Express remain my favorites for now.

Alright everyone, alright. I'll slow down on Starlight. She'll have her moments, but she won't be doing much when I start the second half of the season, except for the chosen few chapters.

This isn't something bad, is it?

Good chapter, and I like the way you brought up wrestling out of scissors.

You could have a scene where rainbow is talking to tank about all the praise she is getting is unjustified.

6996073 Don't worry, I have Tank coming in a few chapters. :raritywink:

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