Lyra has been dating her human coltfriend for a little while now and wants to start a herd with Bon Bon. The problem is, Bon Bon doesn’t want to accept her feelings for the strange creature. Can the earth pony find love with the bizarre human?
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....uh oh.
Clever girl...
First to write a comment fuck yeah,
BTW great chapter.
Well I look forward for it. Keep up the good work!
"Comma!" Lyra screamed at the top of her lungs, everypony in the vicinity nodding their heads at her sage proclamation.
hmmmm, i forsee the first few days in the cabin having lots of screaming and things flying around, mostly head level of chris. it will be hilarious.
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Always refresh...
in other news I like this idea, crazy, stupid, funny. It just works.
Oh dear, this should prove interesting. I await the next chapter with bated breath.
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Fixed now.
I don't know why, but Google docs takes out random stuff when I import a doc...
it was supposed to be: “Your shop will be fine for two weeks," Lyra quickly countered,
Oh dear, lyra what are you up to now you silly pony?
She says while looking up a bondage spell.
Hmph, nice dodge
Lyra's a little cray-cray, but I still love her. Looking forward to Bon Bon's reaction when she realizes that she's stuck in a cabin in the woods with Chris.
Your story has made it on the homepage feed! Congratz!
5715703 actually toy were late by 15 min.
... Wat? How is it possible to understand the reasoning behind a completely irrational action? It really confused me every time Chris blames himself to the point where I'm beginning to think he has some sort of learning difficulty to be as stupid as he is portrayed especially with his absurd level of obliviousness to Lyra's advances.
I don't know if i should congratulate her for her creativeness or call the nearest mental word and ask them if they are missing a guest.
Um...
Yeah, that's some Stephen King style horror (see 'Misery') crap right there, Lyra...
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No worries, it gave me a chuckle when my brain ran away with the scene.
Clippity cloppity XD
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What you believe you understand and what the truth of the matter is are two separate things. If he thinks, without a doubt, she just hates him, then he understands that she hates him. Even if the truth was something else entirely.
As it stands, he understands she was uncomfortable, which frankly is completely understandable. She panicked, also understandable. He doesn't know why but he understands that her nerves and anxiety led to her panicking and running. Thus the statement is true and he's actually rather not stupid at all. Just fairly oblivious due to his circumstances.
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Its not so bad.
..until Lyra trap them together and realize she didnt refill the toilet paper supply.
I was actually expecting Lyra to trap Bonbon and Chris in Bon's candy shop.
Show of hands to have Chris's name officially changed to Crackers.
Also, Lyra is haggard looking because she was busy burying the bodies in the woods...
5715884 well darn that's one serious case of obliviousness. I hope someone comes up with a cure soon before he walks in front of Twililight casting an experimental combat spell with a 15 second charge time and warning lights.
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Chris knows that Bon Bon is afraid of him and that's why she hit his hand away. He had to live with ponies constantly running from him when he first got to Equestria witch was touched on in the first story and will be brought up again latter.
Up until this point Bon Bon had been avoiding him and keeping her distance showing that she was afraid to some degree. He might not know ALL the reasons behind Bon Bon's actions, but he can tell when somepony is afraid of him.
Aslong as they don't find a book in the basment made out of pony hide with a face on it, I'm all go for where this is going...
Wait that sounds kinda cool so I guess im up for it either way
I Enjoyed the chapters, thank you for fun read...
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I would do both.
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Lyra is a very, very, very silly little pony.
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I might have to change his name now. And don't give away spoilers! Gosh!
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Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed it. I was worried this chapter might have been kind of boring.
5716006 She went from smiling and enjoying herself to violently lashing out in a split second, I don't know about you but that doesn't seem very rational to me. OK fine maybe it could be a panic response but still I can't see how it could be anyone's fault but Bon Bon's because she was rather obviously the one that took the violent action. Sure she leaned back from him which could have been an indicator to Chris that she was uncomfortable but the fact remains Chris did nothing wrong and it grates on me when he is beating himself up about it. OK maybe saying he might have a learning disability is going over the score but I got the habit of over exaggerating and sensationalising things from the harmful radiation put off by Fox News.
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Hahaha. Yeah Fox News will do that to ya. But you're not wrong. Chris is beating himself up over something that really wasn't his fault, but he doesn't know that yet. All this stuff will be brought up latter, so hang on to your butt cheeks. It's going to be a crazy ride.
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*hugs* it's just some liquid pride.
5716018 good, bad, Bon Bon's the one with a gun?
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If his hand turns evil he can just cut it off and replace it with a chainsaw.
now i'm wondering if lyra's plan will actually work. she's running twilight levels of crazy right now, and that's not a good sign for any plan.
i'm betting on her plan going horribly wrong at the last second, and somehow putting her in danger, then bon bon and chris will have to team up to save her.
just how wrong am i? only one way to find out. wait.
she's got a point.
Lyra is loco.
I can tell why you have 6 editors...
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Wow! How did I not notice that for this long haha. fixed, and yes... I need a lot of editors working around the clock and in shifts, just to make my stuff comprehensible.
I don't see any way this can possibly go wrong...... or maybe I just need another drink :)
Fox News is just as bad as CNN..... or is that the other way around. That's why I watch ESPN and read all day. If I want over sensationalized "news" hype from either side, I'll go read the Onion LOL
Great chapter.... this is going to be a fun ride..... better buckle up and get a helmet (or a straight jacket that Lyra will probably soon need).
Keep it up!!
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Indeed, though it's fun to go through and fix as many grammatical errors as possible. Though when I miss his new additions, that's when they slip by.
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Liquid Pride eh?
~Facepalm~ Goddamit, Lyra.
Also congrats on being on the home page Puss! Shall we throw a party sometime?
I love this story i can't wait to see how the cabin thing works out tho i bet it it will be fun to read.
Did Lyra look for those at the library? And if so, why would they have such dangerous and forbidden spells that anybody can easily access?
Also, the cabin is a nice touch to the plan with a restriction barrier, but has a magnetizing spell ever crossed your mind? You know, where Bon Bon and Chris are stuck together by the torsos for a brief period and they're forced to do their usual routines like running her candy shop. Just humor me, that's all.
I wondered why Bon bon's favored drink was the Mojito, I figured it be some candy flavored drink like a Balies, or a daiquiri. Then the scene with sweaty Lyra reminded me, now its kind of obvious. I wonder if other ponies think its strange to enjoy drinks flavored after your close personal friends. Or is that a sign of past physical intimacy.
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I was gonna say more than that. jesus.
I think that would be illegal in 95% all country.
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Well that escalated quickly.
I figured this would end by having Princess Luna take either Chris or Lyra into Bonnie's dreams. (Or the other way around)... But what you're proposing sounds like like an excellent formula for shenanigans! I likey. Can't wait to see what happens next!
"When I'm hot, I sweat perfume. I'm cleaner than a fresh needle, and nothing leaves my body that you can't drink like wine or eat like candy." ~ Bruce Sterling, "Schismatrix"
Dear Berry, I think Christ might find that sediment incredibly racist.
5716098 I would go with good. Can just picture Bon Bon trying to shot the cut of hand running around like some creepy ghoulish spider.
5716154 Of course, the chainsaw is most important. And with Bon Bons fear of them it can ensure for some hilarious moments.
Maybe I'm overthinking this?