Lyra has been dating her human coltfriend for a little while now and wants to start a herd with Bon Bon. The problem is, Bon Bon doesn’t want to accept her feelings for the strange creature. Can the earth pony find love with the bizarre human?
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But... I don't get it.
When's the clop tho?
I'll just leave this here.
Very odd name for a chapter.....
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The clop was in the last chapter you little Luna! Just hold your ponies!
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And yet I got nooooo recognition for the greatest contribution I made to this chapter. For shame, puss.
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Y-yeah... You'll see why.
6119424 You don't want to know the things i imagined with that title.
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Fixed.
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Or do I?
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Thanks! I mean, it's only the best thing I've done for this story.
6119434 what did you think of them in episode 100?
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(pssssst, it's best not to ask about that episode)
I see what you did there.
.....well that escalated quickly.
It's your story P2, can't hate you for telling your tale the way you want to......but a cliffhanger???? Damn, that's just mean.
I'll be waiting til the next installment.
Please hurry!!!!
You know, I shouldn't feel happy about this, but between Lyra's breakdown, and how she handles learning that her setting this up led to Bon Bon's leg getting broken, I may actually be able to forgive her for the shit she's pulled.
The door thing ain't a big deal really.
But in throwing her she now has another traumatic leg injury to associate with hands and hand like objects.
Still, i get the feeling Chirs is going to beat himself up more than bonbon. Hopefully Lyra knows a healing spell or something for the pain.
You monster, how could you end it on a cliffhanger like that? Seriously though, another good chapter. TBH, it was kind of stupid of Chris to have a quadrupedal creature do so many bipedal dances. He was just asking for the end result... I guess Lyra will either meet them on the way to the hospital or she is going to arrive at an empty cabin and be very confused.
Well that certainly was an emotional roller coaster. Bravo.
Oh, GOD-- that ending.
If shit does hit the fan, I got you covered:
Sudden ending, like drinking coffee in a quiet morning only to have a train smash into your house at full speed.
But with these three, that would feel like monday. Its normal. Murphy is the fourth member of the herd.
I sense awkward explanations of why he could just open the door in the future.
Well that sure was heartbreaking. Hopefully things will get better by next chapter, or at least I hope so D:
Still, ouch... ouch indeed Dx
i so called the chicken thing, and that is kinda shitty way to end a night, with a broken leg. dancing is dangerous!
When I read that part where her leg broke I shivered at the thought of it
well if things don't end well I think I need to pull out my very special chainsaw I save for certain authors
When's bon bon gonna tell him she's a secret agent? Just kidding, that was a fever dream and never happened. IT. NEVER. HAPPENED.
Dat cliff hanger tho, why you gonna leave me hanging of this cliff, puss?
Well let's just invent some bullshit about the door having a failsafe in case of serious injury to explain to Bonny why he could open the door...
Wait a minute !
I sure hope Lyra included something like that , because if not , their little stay could have been horrifiying. Imagine if they had injured themselves only to be left to die...
So... no pain no gain? :P
Thanks for the perfectly timed update , would have had nothing to read without it and baths are no fun without a good story. ^^
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Is it just me, or is that second paragraph incomplete? I know I'm not seeing things. What aren't you telling us Pusspuss!? What!? Because I'd seriously like to know.
Peace,
AuthorGenesis
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Stupid Google docs! It's fixed now.
Thank you for pointing it out. It was supposed to be. “That song. I’ve heard you singing it before.”
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Really? ( ಠ ͜ʖರೃ) I for one, thought this chapter ended on a rather high note!
...
They left the music on didn't they...
Well, the end of this chapter was certainly unexpected, but I like that. If a story is too predictable it's no fun to read. Poor Bonny though. Poor Lyra too, she's going to turn up to an empty cabin and she's going to panic so hard.
Boy I hope you have a good reason for this because it just feels sudded and something added just to have unneeded filler. The last bit was defiantly out of left field.
Also why does he compare the equines of Equestria to earth equines? Their anatomy is really nothing alike aside from the fact the look the same. I doubt a horse on Earth could dance with an human. Their legs don't really work that way.
I'm no dance expert so I could easily be wrong, but I thought in a waltz her left forehoof would go on his right shoulder while he held her right hoof with his left hand with his right hand on her back.
Edit:
Yeah, I think you might, just might...actually mean shoulder. The hip just seems like an awkward place for a hoof.
.... I'm having a heart attack.... Just give me a few weeks, I'll be fine... Unless I die...then I won't be fine...
You're a damn tease for ending the chapter there.
Poor Bon Bon! I feel so bad. I hope she recovers ok.
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You have to remember that ponies are smaller then humans.
Their gonna shoot Bon Bon now
Well maybe not, Run Chips. run get help...
Ah, poor Chris... and Bonnie, too, of course.
Now, he probably has two mares pissed off at him!
Bon Bon for breaking her leg, and not telling her about the door.
And Lyra for breaking her best friend/lover's leg.
neat
stayclassy
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Still seems kind of awkward, but hey, ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ that's what you get for waltzing with a quadruped.
So I guess that would mean she is either much smaller than I thought or not standing completely upright.
I know this is nitpicking but still feel like I should point it out. left hand would be holding her right hoof and his right hand on her back.
Taking note:
Ponies are more fragil than humans. Be careful when swinging.
Chapter's marching merrily along, everything's all hunky dory and full of smiles.
Then
And everything goes haywire, with a heaping scoop of oh shit...
I don't know why you'd think this chapter was going to get hate. It was just an unfortunate moment that could have happened at any time, really.
Oh geez. Hopefully Lyra doesn't think the worst.
Who am I kidding, of course she's going to.
Really nice development chapter. See seems like next chapter should have Lyra's breakdown, really look forward to that!
Meanwhile, In Ponyvile.
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Also, I see that Lyra's parents are members of Speakeasy's mafia...they're even using the fake 'Made in Canterlot' labels on the wine.
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Chris should have imagined Bon Bon was a bottle, then he probably would have caught her.
I am loving this wayyyyyyyyyyy too much. BON BON! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! And is it weird? I think it's weird. But Scary is kinda like the most awesome supporting character ever. He's my new favorite.
Dat ending doe! I guess I'll just brood while I wait for updates.
I knewww this was going to end with a cliffhanger. But not with a twist that way~ gosh amazing chapter as always ~ so much looking forward for next chapter as always c: