Lyra has been dating her human coltfriend for a little while now and wants to start a herd with Bon Bon. The problem is, Bon Bon doesn’t want to accept her feelings for the strange creature. Can the earth pony find love with the bizarre human?
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I highly doubt this ain't no place for no hero...
While I was surprised at how fast things went it certainly wasn't bad. Keep going.
wearing*
twitch*
remove keep
than*
I'm not too sure about this one but I think it's came*
Great chapter, once again. I've got a close eye on my Library!
"I also think that some people are going to be sad that they didn't do enough."
Are you serious? this was perfect! It was their first time doing sex stuff with each other and you managed it wonderfully
Also, Bonny can't into blowjobs
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Very nice except for the unneeded crotch boobs.
That was really hot. Definitely worth losing sleep over. ^^
Welp! I'm off to find a frozen in pond in Texas in early June. Wish me luck.
Very very good. £1 fish.
I shit you not, it was at this point that I got up, and made myself a sandwich.
6068724 That's always something that gets me. Alas, it is how the ponies are, and it's not too bad if it's in text form.
Ah yeah! Helmet for life! You roll with the helmets, you die with the helmets!
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CUTENESS LEVEL= SWEETIE BELLE
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Commence read.
That was...hm. Not sure if it was a little speedy, but they do have a bit of background with each other.
Plus Lyra, probably, broke through that embarrassing wall of sexual shenanigans beforehand with her tell alls.
Bon Bon being all shy and cute.
The blowing part reminded me of some joke. Where blowing sucks, but sucking is awesome. Something like that.
I always hate being that guy, but you have a double space here because that's a thing that Openoffice does sometimes apparently for some reason...
Same thing here.
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WOAH WOAH WOAH. HOLD THE PHONE
Ponies have elbows?
It better not be! Poor Scary's getting left out!!
Lyra and Bonnie better not let it get out about the Magic of Fingers, or they're going to have to fight the other mares off of him with clubs.
That was rather fast, but given how lyra had been talking about chris in detail so much I can sorta make sense of it.
I love how your clop scenes feel like part of the story, instead of just an add on chapter. A lot of other stories don't seem to know how to put clop into their stories and make it read just like the rest of their story, but you do! Also, your clop scenes are extraordinarily sexy.
This wasn't fast at all. As anyone who's been in a situation where closeness and touching turns to petting can tell you, hormones can easily carry it this far and beyond in an eyeblink.
I always knew that unless we got through the cabin and did a time jump this would feel rushed. One week is a very short time for such a dramatic reversal of their relationship. That being said this is sooooooooo much less jarring then I thought it would be.
6069056 Yes they do, and writs, and hips, and shoulders, and toes. Actually it's more like one giant mutant toe... thing. Fun fact all mammals, reptiles, and birds have basically the same skeletal structure, it's jest been, stretched here, compacted there, and morphed into funny shapes in places.
Good spot to stop, they got closer, but didnt go too far. They got caught up in the intimacy of the moment, of breaking through her phobias.
Loved how you did this chapter.
I totally missed the FiMFic notifications for all 3 new chapters being posted
I've been playing way too much Pony Clicker
In all seriousness though, I wish I would just pay more attention to my notifications . I mean just how did I miss all 3 new chapters
Self criticism aside, I've read 2/3 and I certainly have no complaints
still kinda mad at myself though...
Holy shit. Dang that was good. It's been 2 minutes since I finished the chapter and my heart is still racing.
nicely fits the story. I'm a relentless nitpicker though, so...
Never use the word urethra in anything that is supposed to be remotely erotic.
Fuckin hot dude.
I feel like it didnt go far enough, but I am willing to wait for them to go all the way.
Great chapter, I can't wait til the next one!
Man, I love how you wrote this, its awesome.
yeah its clop, I suppose, but to me its more then that. Its a show of intimacy and trust and blah blah blah Idon't know, but its not just clop. It something more, and how this was written out shows it. And I like that, Mindless clop is not fun. This adds onto the story, as it shows her getting over her fear and finally being able to do stuff with him, but not going to far. Know what I mean?
Anyways, awesome chapter man, and nice job!
This was fantastic.
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That'll be a awkward three way...
//giggle//
Pony x pony got nothing on human x pony. A human's hand is great for belly rubs, among other things.
Seriously though, that was probably one of the most cutest, yet hottest human x pony clop scenes I ever read in fan fiction.
Moments like these make Human In Equestria an amazing experience to read.
I applaud you sir.
^ my face after reading this chapter. Didn't get much sleep last night and this day just zipped past me... not complaining though now that i finished this one.
"Can I see it?" And lo and behold, it looks like a giant spider! Wearing a pith helmet.
Loved the way you paced it Pusspuss. I've really been enjoying this story so far, it hits all my Adorasensitive spots!
But!
Should be was, keep same tense.
Otherwise, looking forward to more adorbshenanigans
To be honest i expected for this to end with.
I shit you know, this is how u thought this chapter would end.
Every man in the world has a "horn" *insert Kaitlyn Jenner joke here*
Hot!
supa hot fira
I just overcame my phobia. I KNOW! LET'S HAVE THE THING I WAS AFRAID OF GO UP MY VAGINA AND CAUSE ME TO ORGASM! HOORAY!
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Yeah I missed the old fimfiction e-mail notification too.
Holy Sweet Celestia that was Hot!
I hope this isn't how she'll get over her fear of the spider.
More than happy, eh?
Oh, Bon Bon...
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When's the clop, though?
6068724 But they're so hawt
Bon Bon's first attempt at a blowjob was friggin hilarious, I know more than her and I'm a 16 year old boy
What is this? Fairly Odd Parents? (Pardon me if i got the name wrong)
Also
My good author, go read a fic called "The White River Cafe", and you will know what that made me think of. *coughtcumfilledbonbonscought*
Bonny is SUCH a sweetheart!
I would expect Chris to stop after the accidental touch down there and wait for Bon Bon to say something before continuing, he was pretty cautious before touching her... You could have written some bits there in Chris's perspective for some explanation. Maybe some foreshadowing, hinting Chris's arousal for not getting some for quite a few days with a sexy mare around.
Some communication like this would have been perfect there.
Y'know, for flow and stuff...
And I agree with the notes.
Why do I have the sudden urge to climb the nearest mountain and start singing?
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I'm never going to see the sea-salt ice-cream from Kingdom Hearts the same way again.
6223049 Glad I wasn't the only one who thought of that!
Five Stars for you!