Lyra has been dating her human coltfriend for a little while now and wants to start a herd with Bon Bon. The problem is, Bon Bon doesn’t want to accept her feelings for the strange creature. Can the earth pony find love with the bizarre human?
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And that's a hat trick! Now complete with Lyra's slow descent into wherever her mind is going!
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Super sorry for being such a stick in the mud for these three parts, but spelling errors really irk me XD
In any case, I'm really glad the cabin arc is over (at least I think it is), and I'm excited for a nice internal conflict with Lyra. However, I'm hoping it'll be more interesting than just her fretting over how they'll react when they get out. Speaking of which, when are Chris and Bon Bon getting let out of the cabin? How far into the two weeks are we?
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It's all good man! Thanks you for finding those. Its all fixed now. And as for the stuff with Lyra... Well... Just you wait sir. Just you wait.
Also Chris said in part 1 that they had been in the cabin for a week. So they have been in there 7 days. And I can't give you spoilers about when they get out.
Sweet mother of Celestia, 3 Chapters at once? I'll read these on my break
6068724 What's wrong with anatomically-correct ponies?
Well it appears that Scary was right the whole time!
Thank you for. Wonderful chapter...
And done! Loved it
Though now I feel sad about Lyra
is this my Christmas present way ahead of time? cos holy shit 3 chappys? I LOVE YOU
Lovely chapter. Really top shelf. Just one question; Wasn't Chris making carrot soup when Bobby lead him away?
Oh and fyi it's been featured at his time.
The next day, the fire department finds the charred remains of a unicorn wearing a shirt. Cause of the house-fire: burned tea.
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No longer can one ask: "where the clop tho?".
No longer can one yell: " Fucking hug it out already, ya gits"
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Happiness for all!
I can't believe I read these. It's midnight now and I have work tomorrow... BUT IT WAS SO GOOD! I regret nothing! Character development is coming along nicely too! Keep up the amazing work!
6068625 That's the thing about writing. You cannot resuse expressions without it being a little weird. Shame, though, because often those expressions the the best ones.
I guess you could describe it differently... "He contorted the muscles on one side of his forehead resulting in the slewing of his eyebrow."
Hahaha, I make myself laugh sometimes.
6069021 *Boooooooo*
Nah jk
6069027 Ha! Speedy! That word reminds me of someone!
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It's about time!
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Lyra is going a little crazy. Well... even more crazy then she normally is.
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*Hands you a tissue*
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It's how I had to split the chapter up. I was going to put that last part into the clop chapter, but that wouldn't be fare to the ones that want to skip the clop.
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Sleep is for the weak!
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That's what I think, but with everyone wanting the clop I thought people would be sad lol.
And at lest she tried.
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Sorry you don't like crotch boobies.
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Hahaha. All good songs for sure. The first one was really nice. Gonna have to add that one to my play list.
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I would have to say nothing.
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When is Scary ever wrong?
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Good luck friend.
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Happy Birthday!
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He was was yes, but now all those carrots he was using are spoiled. It's okay, there are still some more in the fridge.
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Really? I think your the first one. Everyone else seems to hate her.
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I love fish!
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Way to post spoilers! I hope your sandwich was good.
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Yes! It is over. The time for cuddles is now!
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Never seen that show but I will say... yes.
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Yay! Glad you like it. Sorry I kept you up.
Commence read.
Vengeance still planned, but still a good step forward.
Now for Lyra to find out and see how long it takes for her to find out that they did get along.
6069046 hey puss puss I got one question for you, guy... When the threesome tho?
Is it possible to die of acute cuteness exposure? Because I think I just did, and that would raise some rather interesting philosophical and existential questions about this comment.
hopefully he can rescue the half made carrot soup in the kitchen.
They're just lucky the stove wasn't on.
*Glomps the pusspuss* Darn good chapter, more than worth the wait... and now I want more x3! Want them all happy and mussy and stuff togueter x3!
Three Chapters?! You released three chapters nearly once?! Sweet mercy, this is awesome! :D
Currently reading another story, but I'll definitely take a look at the three newest chapters to your story ASAP.
Dis is gunna be gud!
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It's a trick of the mind. Hard to explain... and I'm to tried to try.
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Oh I'm not even going to play into that one. Your just going to have to keep reading and find out.
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It might have been a little fast... But yeah Lyra helped break that barrier and they both kind of got caught up in the moment. lol
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Yay! I'm glad you liked it.
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Don't hate to be that guy! I like that guy lol. Helps me so I can fix it for future readers.
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I think it is possible. You better be careful.
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Not sure they can save what Chris started, but they have enough to make more.
Story is going well, but now poor Lyra has been hit hard by depression.
About the only thing that would hold her together is a little intervention by a couple of busy bodies. I'm talking Octavia andVi yo, I'm sure their now wondering what cruse they went on. And once they find out she lied, their going to wonder what happened to Bon Bon and Crisp.
But Now secretly Scary gets out of the glass prison, and heads for the record player...
http://youtu.be/fK4df6zO7G0
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Glad you liked it. And I do too... I hope this story has a good ending.
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Yeah. A lot happens on this day!
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Scary has his own mares to worry about. And don't worry. It will be there little secret.
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They differently let things get out of hoof.
6069113 I mean I'm just sitting here by the kings gate satin for some jolly cooperation and you won't fall into my spider web of mischief. Clever, puss... Clever puss.
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He gets it... eventually.
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Excellent chapters. Well worth the wait. I can't wait for their first kiss though.....but now there can be lots of cuddles and ear scratching.....plus other stuff.
Am I alone in really hating Lyra here?
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Brings me tears of joy to see all those downvotes on the teat hater's comment. Anatomically correct lovers, unite!
Honestly, I would have thought if anyone would complain about anatomically correct pretty cartoon pony bits, they would complain about how the clitoris peaks outwards in a wink when stimulated or aroused. But, I bet that got his rocker going so he didn't comment about it, eh?
6069123 I understand what is happening, I'm just wonderng if it is common in real life for people to feel actual pain instead of just massive anxiety? I've heard of phantom pain before in amputees, so I know it is possible for the brain to make up real pain, but I've never heard about it in this type of scenario. Just curious.
I wish this story would update, OH SHIT IT DID, OH HOLY SHIT 3 PARTS OH GLORIOUS DAY KALOO KALAY!
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Not a goddamn thing.
Tis a shame you had to butcher your story like this.
I know Lyra has been making herself miserable this past week, but I hope Chris and Bon Bon do not reassure her the moment they meet back up. It is really awkward to go from hugs to putting the screws on someone.
Three part update...!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Woo awesome. Let the actual wooing begin. Just so much can happen?
Loved every word of new chapters, thank you for the update. I can't wait for the next one!
YAY! 3 part update, glad i got to read this before i head out to build things, i really liked the firelilly confession! so cute of bonnie
I was sad when this story didn't update for a while, then we got three chapters (segments, whatever) at once!
Me:
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Now I can look forward to the inevitable 3 way clop chapter! You are planning on making one right?
Now they just need to find a girlfriend for Scary.
Wait... Nevermind , bad idea for him.
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HA XD
That took me a little longer to get than I'm prepared to publicly admit, But I pissed myself as soon as the penny dropped.
Oh my glob.. 3 chapters all at once...
*looks at clock*
1:37 am
*brings out 10 litres of coffee*
let's do this
Scary, ultimate spider-wing-man.
Don't worry Chris, Scary's got ya back. Lettin' Bonny talk it all out 'n shit, convincing her to finally let you make contact, which escalated rather rapidly to havin' a crack at her candy jar. It was quick but didn't feel... overly rushed.
There was already a lot of tension in the cabin as it was, surely Lyra's incessant babbling about how good human hands were surely influenced Bonny's curiosity. She was already flushed with adrenaline before ole mate even laid a hand on her. The intimacy of the body contact,(essentially spooning) would effect anybody in that situation.
As she came down from her phobia induced adrenaline spike, and arrived at the realization that she was perfectly safe in the arms of Chris, her mind would try to mentally grasp anything that could fill the void that the sudden absence of fear would produce. Brains don't cope well with a sudden shift of perception. The "assumed" accidental brush of the teat was the unexpected stimulus that she just happened to latch on to. (Hey, I'm no expert on any of this crap so if I'm wrong... meh!)
I expect things to be a little awkward once the post "coital" bliss has subsided.
You have mates,
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Does Chris have a sister?
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Yeah I can sleep when I'm dead (tierd from sleep deprivation )
What she did was wrong but she knows Bon Bon and Chris better than anyone and with Bon Bon's level of stubbornness it was kinda the only way.
Also these 2weeks must have been killer for her, not knowing if the two she loves and care for the most will hate or maybe even leave her.
So I can still feel sympathy for her even knowing what she did.
First a dry spell then ALL THREE CHAPTERS AT ONCE
mfw
And alcohol! Don't forget the alcohol!
Lyra needs some massive hugs
6069238 I heartily agree!
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He just said he does in the first part of the chapter XD