Lyra has been dating her human coltfriend for a little while now and wants to start a herd with Bon Bon. The problem is, Bon Bon doesn’t want to accept her feelings for the strange creature. Can the earth pony find love with the bizarre human?
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I would say he was doing both of those at the same time.
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Thank you! I will do my best.
Whelp....that snowballed rapidly.
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It was a toss up between Tennant and this:
Eh, sex is messy. No avoiding it. May as well play it up.
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Don't you mean...
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Why would people be grossed out with this?
*While reading the fan fic*
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Referring back to the story description, I don't think I'm THAT awesome lol.
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I'm going to take you threw my reaction to this comment step by step.
It snowballed? ... ... ... clever.
5629638 Really? i never knew that?
Meanwhile from background story.
Suppose I'm attacked by a Human with a banana and I haven't got a Coltfriend?
Run for it.
You could stand and scream for help.
Yeah, you try that with a pineapple down your windpipe.
A pineapple?
WHERE !? WHERE !?
No, I just said human have a marefriend.
Oh. Phew. I thought my number was on that one.
What, on the pineapple?
WHERE !? WHERE !?
Btw, this chap is sexy.
5629705 I...wait, what? My ideas...you're hurting my ideas...
omfg puss so much clop this is literally what i had to say halfway through the chapter
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amazing stuff man.
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Don't pay any attention to Snuggly. He's a shitlord of a troll and he's been trolling at least several dozen fics. He does it for the attention. Just downvote and ignore.
This is off to a really good start! Keep up the great work!
Dude, fix the errors in your long description.
Very nice! Personally I can't wait for the Bonny clop.
Bon-Bon with cream filling... oh god I am such a perv...
Well, that man had his hands full, and hopefully full again soon with Bon Bon. Real fun, when he goes to Raritys to work, I bet she is going to smell something in the air!
5630248 I was being honest :)
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LOL! Peacekeeper! Your the best. Seriously I laughed really hard at that. And I hope all my chapters are like that for people. Even the none clop ones.
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Meh. I don't really care. Even if he is just trolling. I mean I'm not going to please everyone.
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Could you help me out and point to the errors that you see. I looked over the description a few times and couldn't find anything.
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Yes! lol. Fixed now.
Glad I'm not the only one who enjoys a good plot, Puss! Seriously though, watching you draw the cover art has me so hyped, I can hardly wait for you to update!
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Oh that was you in there! Thank you for coming by to chat and watch me paint lol. And thank you.
Another nice chapter, but there's some things you may want to edit.
That shouldn't be capitalized.
That should be "talking".
You'll want to delete that "d" in there.
Again, delete the "d".
I think there should be a "him" in between those two words.
Those should be "vibrations" and "double".
That should be "suckle".
I suggest putting a comma after "harder".
That should be "come".
That should be "Chris".
Those should be "lover's" and "travelling".
I would change that to "relaxing".
I suggest adding a comma after "again".
You'll want to delete that repeated word.
I suggest changing the first period to a comma and the second one to a question mark.
Yeah, character's seem to do shit regardless of what you want, right? I've written some offensive things before, though they were never my thoughts on the subject, they were just things the characters seemed to do. Damn those autonomous motherfuckers.
5631477 Of course buddy! I wouldn't miss this fic for anything. Besides, I had tons of fun talking with you and the others while you were drawing.
Wait a minute...
Oatmeal!? Are you crazy?
eugh snowballing. But if you're doing for the sake of character I suppose that's fine.
Also that cover pic is amazing. If a 1920x1080 version existed it'd end up as my wallpaper.
5629435 ... I scroll down to write a comment, and this is what I see? Jesus... That wasn't punny man, not punny at all.
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I could make one that a higher resolution... But idk a good place to post it...
5631705 Another upload to your furaffinity? imgur and then a blog post or hand out the link? I dunno, I just appreciate art I've never uploaded any.
Either way im'a be following your work now, both fics and art
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Oh thank you friend! And I will work on making a bigger file for this one. I'll post it on FA for people. I just hate posting supper high resolution stuff on that site.
5631775 Sweet! I can't wait to get my hands on those pictures of prime pony plot.
5631775 oh and that 'Rainbow Dash Is Excited' video in your YouTube playlist, has ruined my life. I can't get that little song out of my head.
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All I want to do is have some fun! I got a feeling, I'm not the only one!
5631356 Don't worry, everyone do a mistake
Good, good, let the sequel flow through you
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Good on you sir. *claps* good on you.
The snowball effect is an enjoyable act ^_^ I know my wife enjoys it so it's good with me :p looking forward to how this goes, so I'll keep stalking you *grins*
Mane medic
5629789 You like pineapple?
Do you like join me? on my bed?
This was a fantastic chapter. You have earned the following:
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This is good i can't wait to see how the date goes with bon bon.
Overall, I'm well pleased. I don't like the whole "flavor swap" but hey we can just hand-wave that as a pony thing and even then some people like that. So whatever bro. That one kink just adds one more bit of realism.
Indifferent to the ending if you were worried about that. Honestly different strokes for different folks, not one too judge.
Great read either way!
5632338 Happy Applejack!
5631889 Angry Applejack!
Im talking about your avatar pictures!
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Angry applejack?
I'd say borderline homocidal applejack.
My fiance likes that nasty kiss too. And I just feel like Chris
Is it bad if I would've enjoyed that kiss?
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Nope.
5829667 Phew. Thought it might be a bit weird and all to others
i have mixed feelings but a part of me is at full attention :|