Lyra has been dating her human coltfriend for a little while now and wants to start a herd with Bon Bon. The problem is, Bon Bon doesn’t want to accept her feelings for the strange creature. Can the earth pony find love with the bizarre human?
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So that's pretty cool.
Stuff happened, words were said. Some nice cuddly feelings and a couple'a laughs. But throughout the whole thing, there was one thought I couldn't shake. One little question stuck in the back of my head and tainting all my thoughts as I read. It just wouldn't leave me alone, and even now it's all I can think about. And so I'll ask you, Pusspuss.
When's the clop, tho?
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Damn it Jeremy! I told you! Not yet!
The nerve of some people!
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Yusssssss. New chapter can't wait to see what happens I am eternally grateful for fics like these
You even inspired me to start writing my first fic
You're pretty amazing at this.
*clears throat*
Called it.
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Yeah you did... You happy now! You spoiled it for everyone!
Nah you're the best.
Worth the wait!
And day-um, you drew that in the time it took for your editors to go over the chapter? You got skills to pay the bills.
5859137 Here's hoping Bonny gets a lesson on human hand gestures in the future. It'd go a long way for helping her if she were able to poke and prod at his hands in a controlled environment.
Heh, always a laugh to see some dude think that proteins in plants are the same kinds of proteins in meat.
Unless he was lying to Bon Bon to make her feel better, in which case that's going to come back and bite him all the worse for initially lying.
Nice picture. So that's why Bon Bon was so scared of Chris' hands: they resembled spiders too much and she was poisoned by one as a filly.
All in all, this was a really nice chapter.
I'm gonna be honest, I love that they're finally getting along, but I really hate that Lyra was right.
Either way, I really hope this becomes an ongoing series. Chris is way too developed at this point to leave this at two.
I am surprisingly content at her reasoning for fearing/shunning Chris. Well-written sir.
Yay a perfect chapter before I go to bed ^^
Happy to se things are picking up between them :)
5859000 For shame! You have to ask? Everyone knows caramel is sticky. I'd hazard a guess and say next chapter. But nothing overly rambunctious.
Jeezuz christ, fuck spiders. This chapter explains MY Phobia of them, actually. Unless you study the little motherfuckers, you've no clue what's what.*
*Random Factoid: Daddy Longlegs are one of the most poisonous spiders. Factoid 2: Daddy longlegs physically are unable to bite a person.
P.S. That spider was 100X more terrifying until I saw it had a coat like a Shi Tzu. Still shudder inducing, but far less so.
Yay! Substantial progress!
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Neither of those factoids are true.
Great chapter, and amazing mad art skills there! Now get to work on the next one; I'm tired of waiting for the new chapters to come out.
This was a sweet chapter i hope the next one will be as sweet. Maybe some hugging and cuddling too?
So, really loved the chapter but I have a slight complaint. Or well, advice. I would not do chapters based on days like this if you write another story. By that, I mean I wouldn't designate them day 1 day 4 ect. What I feel like that does is constrain you to write every day, or to have something happen everyday. If you just named the chapters, a scary truth, you can have time pass at a more realistic pace. We're some days you just skip with nothing happened, or the routine continued ect. What can happen if you start doing every day is that a ton of character building and content happens in a short time period and it feels Rushed or out of nowhere. That hasn't really happened here yet but it is an easy mistake. If you have ever read one of these 200k word stories you will notice so much stuff has happened in those 200k words, but only a month or so of time has actually transpired. Anyway, I love it, just saying be careful of what I've mentioned.
Scary is now my favorite spider.
5859304 You...You actually caught my entire point...holy shit. you're the second person in 4 years to catch that.
But yeah, those Factoids are complete Bullshit. When I was little, those "facts" scared the shit out of 8 year old me. Then I got bit by a REALLY nasty spider, and SURPRISE! I'm suddenly part beach ball. I was seeing if anyone was smart enough to ACTUALLY look it up, rather than "Listen and Believe".
EDIT: The initial reaction was legit, though, I assure you.
*Meanwhile in the To Find A Rainbow Universe
Will: *reads To Find A Rainbow* What the heck is this?
Twi: These are instant books. The books are out even before the story is finished!
Will: Then what the heck am I reading? When does this happen in the story?!
Twi: Now Will, you're reading bout now, Everything that happens now, is happening now.
Will: What happened to then?
Twi: We passed then.
Will: When?
Twi: Just now. We're at now now.
Will: Well, go back to then.
Twi: When?
Will: Now.
Twi: Now?
Will: Now.
Twi: I can't.
Will: Why?
Twi: We missed it.
Will: When?
Twi: Just now.
Will: So when will then be now?
Twi: Soon.
Will: *skeptical eyes* How soon?
*Both look at JeremyStorm
A million dollars to the person who got this.
That's just a sketch?
Fun story so far, and it's about time they got a good hug in! Keep up the good work - I'm always watching hopefully for a new chapter.
Also, I love your artwork! The cover art for both stories is, um, sexy. And the drawing of Bon Bon and Scary together is very sweet and superb.
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I'm all for nuking the planet from orbit to rid it of spiders – it's the only way to be sure – but unfortunately your 'facts' are just common misconceptions.
Hey Flash Storm.... you have a one track mind! LOL
P2 - awesome chapter and well worth the wait. Can't believe you sketched that while waiting..... oh, actually I can believe it. I actually had an image of Tom Cruise from Cocktail while Chris was making the mojito.
I'd give you a thumbs up, but I'm not in the mood for spaghetti right now.
I loved this chapter. Bonny is slowly getting used to Chris. I hope she can do the same with Scary.
Things seem to be looking up for this 'captivating' couple. But many problems lie ahead. Will Bon Bon overcome her phobia? Can Lyra's plan now get these two out of the friend-zone? Will the barrier falter, or will Chris and Bon Bon be scheduled for an 'extended stay'?
Find out next time on "Everypony Loves Lyra."
Woot! Another chapter I'm, so happy it came out! And the progress here, I love it! ^_^
I knew that Bon Bon was freaking at Chris' hands because they look like spiders, you dropped enough hints for it, but I wasn't aware of the spider-venom-bit-leading-to-almost-losing-her-foreleg part which was a nice touch and makes it understandable from her view and psyche.
Anyway I'm glad to see Chris and Bon Bon finally becoming friends I'm so happy! It's time for Pinkie's "Chris and Bon Bon finally becoming friends after Lyra trapping them in a cabin for two weeks and Bon Bon befriending a spider Super Happy Party!"
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>_>
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What? I can't be the only one thinking? I thought it was a good title... oh! Silly me I forgot to put in the "and Chris showing off his mad drink brewing skills" too! I'm such a silly foal for forgetting that.
Anyway I look forward to the next chapter. By the way how long did it REALLY take you to sketch that artwork? I have to say IMPRESSIVE~!
I see what you did there. LOL
Thank you for an excellent chapter, I love your story...
I've been a fan of your artwork for some time, I'm glad my half wit brain finally put two and two together...
5859406 Truly a masterpiece. And chris? If it's at all possible.... try to save the door....
5859169 The dude ate a fuckin' daisy sandwich to make her feel better, I'm pretty sure even if he knew that he would still say that. That being said, that comes up fairly frequently, though I think eggs are a better source, since it IS animal product protein.
Ah, the horrible truth comes out. Had a feeling it was some deep-seated fear, but the way you revealed it was very nicely done.
Could have called this installment "Look out, here comes the spider, man".
I'll show myself out.
I am so glad we can move more towards acceptance.
The irrational fear of his hands makes sense now.
This is good.
I loved it. Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work!
When Bon Bon screamed for help I though to myself "She's freaking out over a little spider. Chris is going to come in and kill the little bugger and then we're finally gonna get some answers about this spidery-hand phobia of hers."
Then I read this part.
Little spider? No problem.
Big tarantula on the wall? This is where I calmly freak out and try to find a shotgun.
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Will there be a To Find a Rainbow: The Flamethrowah?
That was a great chapter. And that drawing was fantastic.
Two things: do you think The Main five would noted that Chris is Missing or something, and What is Lyra doing during this?
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That's awesome! I'm glad I could inspire you!!
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Well really fast is like... 3 hours.
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I'm glad you liked the chapter! and It was about 3 hours of work to sketch that.
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Yes... Should lie to Bon Bon. It would be so bad if he lied to her. I mean why would he lie.
Don't worry this will make scene latter.
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Thank you! Glad you liked it.
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Thank you! That makes me feel better that you think her reasons for fearing him are justified.
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He's a fluffy cute spider!! Go give him a hug!
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Egg whites are a great source for all protein, the animal specific ones and otherwise. Egg yolks are a great way of making you fat with high cholesterol.
5859560 Might have to ask Pinkie for that. She runs the Interdimentional knick knack stand.
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HAHAH! Nice space balls ref.
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I picture the cat man in your avatar talking to me when I read your comment.
Also I'm working on it!!
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We will see. I don't think they are at the cuddles level yet, but we will see.
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I hope this doesn't go to 200k! But don't worry about the days. There is a reason I am doing it day by day for now, and I would say more, but I don't want to spoil anything.
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You want to know something about that hug? My original plan was to not have them hug, but as I was writing I couldn't have Chris just stand there trying to use his words. They had do to it. They had to hug! Chris wanted me to make him hug Bon Bon.
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Hahaha! Hope everyone that reads this using the thumps up for spaghetti.
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Don't worry the fic isn't over yet.
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Me too! I want Bon Bon and Scary to be friends. Gonna have to keep reading to see if they do.
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Scary is the best spider!
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That's my Lyra!
I really wanna see the colored version of Scary ^_^
Also, if Bon Bon won't have Scary sleeping on her mane at least once in this fic I will scream. And there better be a visual illustration of that!
But seriously, I love what you're doing thus far. Keep going!
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And of course, To Find a Rainbow: The Talking Doll!
(Holds up Rainbow Dash doll and pulls the string)
"I'm afraid of commitment yet hurt my friend with benefits went for something more with my sister!"
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It seems I didn't drop enough hits about that because a lot of people had no clue why she didn't like his hands, even thought she kept calling them spindly spiders. But I am glad you liked this chapter.
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Yeah you know... I have to be subtle about these things.
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Wait. Did you just figure that out? Well yes! It is me! The Artist Pusspuss!
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Thank you! I really like this. This chapter is up there with the date as my favorite ones to write, so I am glad like it.
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Yay! I'm glad you liked it! I know a lot of people couldn't understand why she was so freaked out about his hands. I'm glad you think its acceptable now lol.
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Yeah he wasn't so little.
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If you remember, Chris asked for two weeks off from working with them so they will not be wondering where he is. As for Lyra... well... Your going to have to read the next chapter.
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Lyra for G-man confirmed.
Also... I hope this fic is going better for you.
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Hahaha! Well Scary is white. So... he would look the say only there would be a red mark on his butt.
I know you haven't been around very long, but I can honestly and admittedly say your one of my favorite authors/artists. I proud to say that every time I see new content from you it instantly improves my day.
Keep you the good work, and please never stop writing/drawing.
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Aww! Thank you so much! That makes me really happy to hear. I'm glad that I can provide you with some joy in your life! I will do my best to keep doing what I'm doing.