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Phantom Dragon


I'm just a writer, who writes whatever pops into my head. I hope you enjoy the stories you read :)

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After Tirek's attack, Discord finds that his betrayal greatly affects Fluttershy. So he comes up with a genius idea to gain her trust back.

Takes place after season 4, Inspired by the Trials of Heracles.

Cover art done by me


Special thanks to Sunnypack for helping me edit the first chapter. Also Thank You to PixelFluttershy for helping me edit it.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 7 )

Trial is spelled t-r-i-a-l. In the title, and in multiple random places in the chapter, you have "trail" instead... which is a pathway, but a pathway that someone creates by traveling it, so it doesn't make sense for someone to give Discord a "trail" unless it's something they themselves have already done. Trial makes more sense.

Spellchecker won't catch this because trail is a word, but you should do a search and replace on trail and replace with trial (including in the title), because I saw no instance that legitimately looked like it should be trail.

Comment posted by Phantom Dragon deleted Mar 12th, 2015

5729475 Thank you for spotting that I'll edit it when I get to it

"I'll only count half...."
Genius Apple jack:ajsmug:

6922056 Thanks for the comment. Yeah, it was fun writing the banter between those two. :raritywink:

Please make another chapter soon!

7618766 we'll see, but I have soo many other stories I need to update. Maybe after a ch of Locked.

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