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Twilight and her friends have all been discorded. They have lost all sense of themselves, their friendships and most of all, the Elements they represent. They now embody the Elements of Disharmony. Discord now controls them all. Can they be saved, or is Equestria lost?
Cover Art is by: SpaceKitty on deviantart.com :)
edited by: firebirdabirdoffire
(I also get into a little headcannon about Luna and Celestia but very minor and it's near the end ;p)
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Interesting start.
I like it.
3396869 Thanks! :D Did you notice my lines? I figured them out!! Yay!!
3394880 Thank you, hopefully it will be a good story :D
walked*
there*
Ignoring the mistakes, this is a very interesting story and I can't wait for the next chapter
*seem
, it still seems a bit complacent to leave her out of this while including the others unless she's got some big thing in the next chapter.
Only real mistake I could be bothered correcting besides the huge blank space at the end. All in all though it was a pleasant surprise to see a new addition to this pop up as I just finished reading another story. Reading through it though I noticed a lack a Rainbow Dash, which as funny as it is that the element of loyalty is doing the exact opposite by staying out of the story
I'm in such a criticizing mood today...
Anyhow, another good addition to the story and I can't wait until the next chapter.
3428901 o.o wow I just noticed that too.
I guess I could do something with her. Also: I had more things in Chapter 1 but my old editor deleted them somehow... I don't know why. 
3428901 I fixed it up just for u! :) Thanks so much for you're helpful comment
3429950
and great job again on the story 
Alright thanks
3430727 I'm so glad you like it :) I hope I don't disappoint
Really love the story! Too bad it's now on Hiatus
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Edit: Don't know what to say for critisism :/. Oh yeah, the only problem I have is Pinkie: remember she's suppose to be angry all the time, and not just plain cruel like Fluttershy.
That's all I got, which is a good sign.
3451418 well.... I need more ideas for the story that's why Its on hold now. I don't know how to end it.
3451418 Well good news!! I'm finishing up the story now
How many chapters long is this story going to be for?
3452514 hmm probably five chapters.
Just letting people know that its done!! Be warned though, I get kinda deep in the last chapter.
Headcannons ahoy!!
That headcanon wasn't that bad. Are you sure you loaded it or put in gunpowder?
3464198 o.o I have no idea what you mean? Is it good?
3465442 No, in fact I like to live. Guns, gunpowder and ammo have a tendency to make people stop living. Seriously though, Luna being more angry at herself is often a given, many think that. Wanna know one of my headcanons? Rarity being short sighted, because of the bright flash she got into her eyes after she opened that rock full of gems as a filly.
Little nitpick here, but Twilight's friends didn't start writing Friendship Reports until after Lesson Zero, which happened AFTER Return Of Harmony if we're assuming episode order is the same as chronological order. In other words, Applejack's report existing at this point seems somewhat unlikely...
I see what you did there