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Trixie never thought that this would happen.

Why this? Why now?

Why of all creatures, did it have to be Spike?

Speical thanks to NightmareTRXY32 for doing the cover art.

Check out his Deviant Art page Thenorthremembers3


First Published
29th Feb 2016
Last Modified
9th Feb 2017

Amazing! I love it! Keep writing! :pinkiehappy::derpytongue2::moustache:

>>6987398 Thanks for comment, I'll see if I can do another ch of this story after another ch of Locked

>>6987422

That would be awesome! No pressure whatsoever though! :rainbowkiss:

This looks pretty badass, bro. Gonna have to check it out.

>>6989530 Thank you very much for the comment, I'm glad you liked it. :raritystarry:

ok plc contenyou

>>7033306 :rainbowhuh: I'm not sure what you said but I assume it's asking for more. Thank you very much for the comment.

Considering that Spike actually saw the shape Trixie was in there really isn't much the doctor could have said that would be too extreme for him.  Not to mention that based on this line

If I go home now, all I'll think about is if she survived or not, all I will see is images of her dying.
Spike is already plenty aware that Trixie might die.

Also if the Komodo dragon head bit her she will die. Komodo dragon saliva is filled with massive amounts of deadly bacteria.

Still, I am liking the story so far and shall continue on.

>>7457965 thanks so much for the comment! Actually there was going have mention of finding antidote for the bite of a Komodo dragon, but I think I found faulty info saying that it wasn't dangerous. Perhaps I'll change into the Komodo not biting her at all later. As for the doctor he was being considerate , he didn't know that Spike was the one who found her.

Discharged from the hospital (released):facehoof:

Dismissed from her duties (fired):rainbowderp:

:trixieshiftright: Can't be as bad as the Deadly Manticore Mouth Dive. It's a working title!

:trixieshiftright:He's mine

:raritycry: MINE!

:pinkiegasp: Pony fight!

:moustache: can't we share ???

:rainbowlaugh:

>>7459537 oh okay I'll fix it thanks

>>7460176 Just waiting for the show down,,, :trixieshiftright: v :raritywink: v:rainbowwild: v :pinkiehappy: v :flutterrage: v :applejackconfused:

They all get the dragon   :facehoof: what have I done? This is the End of Everything!!!!

:trollestia: No Twilight Sparkle . . .It just the beginning, Pop corn?

>>7457965  thanks so much for the comment! Actually there was going have mention of finding antidote for the bite of a Komodo dragon, but I think I found faulty info saying that it wasn't dangerous. Perhaps I'll change into the Komodo not biting her at all later. As for the doctor he was being considerate , he didn't know that Spike was the one who found her.

The Doctor paused for a moment, then nodded his head "She might not make it"

BTW, where's Starlight Glimmer?

He noticed the nurse was shaking, she used her magic to  lift her hat. A pack of something was under her hat, She used her magic again to took an odd long white cylinder looking thing of the pack.

She took a lighter from the hat and lit the end of the cylinder and smoked it.

:derpyderp2:: I thought there was no smoking in hospitals?

#17 · 3w, 3d ago · 1 · · Ch 5: Helpless ·

>>7916173 well this story was written before she became a character so since this is AU maybe she's still in those caves.

>>7916182 Usually yes, but doesn't mean medical staff doesn't sneak it when no one looking. Since Healing Hoof suffers from Hemophobia as long she does it away from the patients most of the other staff are fine with it.

#19 · 3w, 2d ago · 1 · · Ch 5: Helpless ·

It's not a five-star restaurant Trixie, but I'm sure you won't mind.:ajsmug:

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