Trixie never thought that this would happen.
Why this? Why now?
Why of all creatures, did it have to be Spike?
Speical thanks to NightmareTRXY32 for doing the cover art.
Check out his Deviant Art page Thenorthremembers3
I'm just a writer, who writes whatever pops into my head. I hope you enjoy the stories you read :)
Trixie never thought that this would happen.
Why this? Why now?
Why of all creatures, did it have to be Spike?
Speical thanks to NightmareTRXY32 for doing the cover art.
Check out his Deviant Art page Thenorthremembers3
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Amazing! I love it! Keep writing!
6987398 Thanks for comment, I'll see if I can do another ch of this story after another ch of Locked
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That would be awesome! No pressure whatsoever though!
This looks pretty badass, bro. Gonna have to check it out.
6989530 Thank you very much for the comment, I'm glad you liked it.
ok plc contenyou
7033306 I'm not sure what you said but I assume it's asking for more. Thank you very much for the comment.
Considering that Spike actually saw the shape Trixie was in there really isn't much the doctor could have said that would be too extreme for him. Not to mention that based on this line
Spike is already plenty aware that Trixie might die.
Also if the Komodo dragon head bit her she will die. Komodo dragon saliva is filled with massive amounts of deadly bacteria.
Still, I am liking the story so far and shall continue on.
7457965 thanks so much for the comment! Actually there was going have mention of finding antidote for the bite of a Komodo dragon, but I think I found faulty info saying that it wasn't dangerous. Perhaps I'll change into the Komodo not biting her at all later. As for the doctor he was being considerate , he didn't know that Spike was the one who found her.
Discharged from the hospital (released)
Dismissed from her duties (fired)
Can't be as bad as the Deadly Manticore Mouth Dive. It's a working title!
He's mine
MINE!
Pony fight!
can't we share ???
7459537 oh okay I'll fix it thanks
7460176 Just waiting for the show down,,, v v v v v
They all get the dragon what have I done? This is the End of Everything!!!!
No Twilight Sparkle . . .It just the beginning, Pop corn?
7457965 thanks so much for the comment! Actually there was going have mention of finding antidote for the bite of a Komodo dragon, but I think I found faulty info saying that it wasn't dangerous. Perhaps I'll change into the Komodo not biting her at all later. As for the doctor he was being considerate , he didn't know that Spike was the one who found her.
BTW, where's Starlight Glimmer?
: I thought there was no smoking in hospitals?
7916173 well this story was written before she became a character so since this is AU maybe she's still in those caves.
7916182 Usually yes, but doesn't mean medical staff doesn't sneak it when no one looking. Since Healing Hoof suffers from Hemophobia as long she does it away from the patients most of the other staff are fine with it.
It's not a five-star restaurant Trixie, but I'm sure you won't mind.
Fluttershy a manga reader. I actually read a story that mentioned she wrote mangas and heard about stories where she is a manga writer/reader.
8236433 She drew life-sized manga-style cutouts in that Nightmare Night episode, so it's pretty hard to imagine how she could not be a manga reader.
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Which episode?
Scare Master?
Where?
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Well it based on the scence in Scaremaster where all those manga characters are in the 'uninvited ' guests ( it can't be anime reference because there's no tv) and unless she reads manga she wouldn't know who these manga characters are.
8237472 The Fluttershy nightmare night episode basically there 's scence where Fluttershy tried to be scary , but isn't , there bunch of cardboard cutouts in string who are the 'uninvited guest' which are references to different manga. http://mlp.wikia.com/wiki/Scare_Master
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Thanks. I found it on YouTube. I love 'Evil Angel'
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i did not see this ship coming and I LOVE IT
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I'm glad you like it, yeah this ship was more a 'I don't why I ship it but I do' but as I started planning this fic I shiped it hard .
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well I look foward to the next chapter when ever that comes out
i think I may have subconsciously been inspired by this story
8765 Wow, I don't know what to say . This is the first time anyone said my work has inspired them mmm thank you. I'm so glad you enjoy it.
Been reading this for 2 years...happy to find out about new chapter...even if I am 2 months late.
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Lol it's never too late I'm glad you like it though.
Your welcome..can't wait for more!
whens the next chapter?
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I'm working on it also I'm just very busy
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fair enough just the last update was in febuary and its almost june
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Was it ? Geez I'm sorry my job is keeping me busy I'm trying I do updates on blogs so ...
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Well good luck to you
i look forward to what happens next
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Well there's one last chapter and it's going to be a doosy
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is it spike and trixies wedding?
So sad. Never realized this was based on the Heart song.
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Thanks for the comment yep it’s inspired by a heart song.
Oh man, I remember this story, It was one of the first ones I ever read on Fim, I didn't even have an account back then.
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Well I'm glad you enjoyed I wanted to take crack at a heartbreaking romance, so this story was the result.
Sequel?
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Sorry no , I honestly couldn't think of what to do with a sequel.
But thank for the comment and fav.
You're more than welcome to write yourself, if you like.
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You could have Spike finding out about Rarity’s secret, apologizing to Trixie, and the two of them dating.
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it could happen, but then it would be only one chapter. Even then I'm not sure could stretch it, for one enough of the word count.
Actually I was going to add in last chapter. That Trixie tries to convince Spike to come with her. Because she notices that his friends ignore him. but it never made the final cut.
Rarity must die xd