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Discord Is known for his choatic left claw.
But it gets him in trouble, and spends a thousand years in stone.
Given a second chance, in a weakened state he cast a destiny spell to find a champaion to keep him company until gets his enegry back.
The next day he sudden wakes up with a surprise even he didn't see coming.
Can this be twist of fate or cruetity ?
Very loosely based on the anime Midori days
It's the adaptation no one asked for...oh boy
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Why is the chapter title: Ch 2?
Also, Midori Days? Wow, haven't heard of that in years...makes me feel old.
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Opps I'll fix that thanks
Yeah the idea popped my head I thought why not. We'll see how good it turns out to be.
Very interesting so far.
Hmm. Interesting concept so far. A few comments on technical errors.
There's no need to create a new paragraph with every sentence, especially in dialogue. If you're going to create multiple paragraphs with the same character speaking, it needs to be formatted like this:
"I am speaking.
"I am still speaking." (no quotation mark at the end of the first paragraph)
Otherwise, it's sometimes confusing as to who is speaking, because the way you're formatting it, it looks like two characters are talking back-and-forth.
Remember punctuation. You have periods scattered in odd places (and not always where they should be).
It's "least," not "lease." A "lease" is a contract for renting land or a building.
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Thanks, yeah spelling and grammer has always been my weakness. I tend to overlook those kind of things. I did already go two grammer sites and listen the story read to me out loud. So it's the best I can do.
As the breaks I'll see what I can do.
Thanks for the input
You'll see soon enough, Discord, that using the destiny spell was the right call.