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Phantom Dragon


I'm just a writer, who writes whatever pops into my head. I hope you enjoy the stories you read :)

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Trixie winds up in a jail cell, she is trapped in this place.

Why is she here?

Will she be stuck here for life?

Read to find out

Based on the game Presentable Liberty

Special Thanks to The Fan without a Face and PixelFluttershy for editing it

Check an awesome dub of the game here:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RiQsa5ocXOM&index=1&list=PLwr4APntuEQvf4II7px4WTo0H16pz2Wni

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 18 )

Cool! I'll read it later, but I like the concept. Expect a favorite!

6078836 Thank you the comment I hope you enjoy it:pinkiehappy:

I vaguely remember watching Markiplier play this game so I'm familiar enough to say that this story is pretty good. It doesn't feel like a lazy ponified version and I find it interesting that you chose Trixie as the main character. Yes, she has committed crimes but they were rather small on the larger end of things. Not to mention, if Dr. Bits had done his research, he would have known she'd been betwitched by the alicorn amulet and mostly not responsible for her actions. Somebody has to notice or maybe she's just as stuck as the original protagonist.

Of course, I know the ending and I can't wait to see how this story will progress. Keep up the good work.

6078881 Thank for the comment I'm glad you enjoyed it, yeah I saw Markiplier Play though too it's what inspired me to write this fic.

I'm intruiged. This story looks very promising. Although there are some spelling errors, I enjoyed it. I'll put this under "Tracking".

6079332 Really even I had though I had two editors look over it *sigh* I'm sorry I'm glad you still enjoyed it though.

6079407 Well, scratch that, not spelling errors. Grammatical.

6079411 yeah Spelling and grammar is my Achilles heel unfortunately, I do try but I still miss things :pinkiesad2:

6079425 It's quite alright. Everybody has faults.

This looks really good, and I can't wait for the story to progress! Good job!

6431610 Thanks for the comment :rainbowkiss: What did you specific like?

6431617
I loved the way it was written, as well as the story line. I also liked that Iron Will is Salvador. Good job!

6435531 lol That's why he was chosen:raritystarry: I tried to picked characters were as close as possible to the game.
Also I have give Fan without a face credit for a lot of change that happened, If you get to read You're not alone you see how essential an editor is for me. :twilightoops:

6436012
I'll definitely look at it, thanks!

Will Trixie be badass in this story?

7172203 ... You'll just have to see :raritywink:

Trixie’s eyes and brain hurt from all the grammatical errors.’

A bit ironic considering this fic, isn't it?

7628174 Yeah I understand, I'm trying to catch them but I do miss them a lot. but ch 1 was looked at by two editors so yeah. Writing Dr. Bits is basically a way of me poking fun of myself because I tend miss things like that.

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