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is this gonna be entered in the Twiluna contest? the theme is AU. http://www.fimfiction.net/group/67/twiluna/thread/147777/the-third-twiluna-contest-new-writers-welcome
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It's not eligible on several counts - too many words, started before the contest, and to be honest it's not a romantic story.
Please Sir, i'd like some more!
This looks like it will be incredible. I loved Twilight's Plan, and I am really looking forward to what you do with this (and hoping that there will more fetishes than what's currently listed in the warnings). Also, will this have multiple endings? Because all of those possibilities sound delicious.
Yay! New RandomString story!
5512555 Glad you like it, Foals Errand. The story's written, but it needs a lot of proofreading, so the release schedule will depend on Knight of Cerebus, and how fast I can correct all the problems he finds.
5512887 Only one ending, sorry, BeneathTheShade. Although I am toying with a few ideas for as-yet unwritten epilogues that could include some of the options mentioned... We'll see. Let me see if this story is popular before deciding if I should spend too much more time on it.
As for fetishes, I was a little startled when I drew up the list. There really is a fair amount of clop in this story, with lots of variety (I hope), but most of it doesn't really involve trigger warnings. The first version of this story was much more hardcore, but it sacrificed characterisation, 'realism', and pacing for some questionable scenes. This story is much stronger for dropping them.
5512919 Hope you enjoy it, livinthelife.
How rude. Must a mean place to leave us hanging.
Enjoying it so far. Keep up the good work
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Sorry about that. Looking through the rest of the story, there are a couple more cliff-hangers, I'm afraid. It is an adventure story after all.
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Thanks. Most of my work is done at the moment, I'm at the mercy of my editor.
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how long do you it's going to take?
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No idea, I'm afraid.
I cannot wait. Sooooo glad that the story is only awaiting editing.
Very cool. I love Twilights confusion in this chapter
You've got the set-up, and your first steps out of the gate are solid. Now we get to watch the race
Fun stuff so far. I'll enjoy watching this unfold.
This is turning out just as fun as I had hoped it would.
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Thanks guys - I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far
ZOMBIE FIC! KILL IT BEFORE IT LAYS ZOMBIE EGGS!
This should have been the first chapter. Then you have the previous chapter at the end so the audience is just as befuddled as Twilight the whole time.
5634879 I did toy with the idea, but that then makes the whole 'consent' thingy even more murky than it already is. Not interested in writing a rape fic. The first chapter is setup, establishes Twilight's inclinations, and lets her give clear and knowledgable consent for all that happens. That in turn makes it far easier for her consent of what happens after to be established.
Plus putting it at the end would either make the whole tone of the story a mystery rather than an adventure, or else appear as a deus ex machina cop-out to explain the weird stuff.
And here I was rereading some of your work when I stumbled upon this. I expect pleasant dreams tonight!
Nothing good can come from this.
5635737 Oh, lots of good will come from it, promise!
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Well, from a normal person`s perspective, nothing good can come from this. ...Then again, I don`t think anyone on this site is normal. So, touché.
You already lost interest? If you needed editors, someone- well I was going to say that someone with your reputation should garner an editor, but there are only 287 views. I hope to see more of this in the future, because it's an amazing story so far!
5766958 Thanks, FlameSwordedLink. Don't worry about the story - I'll get it all out. My interests have just drifted away from it, and it seems unreasonable to ask that someone else care more about my story than I do. I think I could find an editor, but eh. Glad you're enjoying it though,
This should be a bigger hit than it is. This is some feature-box writing
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Thanks, ArguingPizza. I could do more to promote it (add it to more groups, participate more in discussions, change it from Anthro to pony), but I'm really not that fussed. I'm just glad that most of the people who have read it did enjoy it.
Aw, I'm surprised 'Moondancer' is having this much trouble. I guess 'first-timer' nerves needed to be factored in. Keep it up, awesome as ever!
Sexy-cute! And it really does make more sense for Twi to sub.
Addendum: Seriously, am I the only one still reading this? I know it's humanized, but still..
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. And yes, looking at the numbers, you are one of a very few people reading. I really enjoyed writing it, and it was educational, so I'm not really bothered. I've had my featured story, I'm good. I'm just going to get the chapters out and decide what I want to do next.
Thanks for the comments, livinthelife
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Well, I'm adding a bit to the stats now.
Well, now that I am all caught up...
Actually, I think I like the "adventure" here more than the sexy times. I don't mean to imply that the sexy times are not good (though I am not all that in to bondage), it's just the exploring is really interesting, even if it's staged. I like how Luna is playing Moondancer too.... Although...
PREDICTION: That really is Moondancer. Luna talked to her to setup her character for this, only to find that Moony really did crush on Twilight, and really did invite her to parties in the hopes of sparking something, and that she is actually insanely jealous of Luna, so Luna decides to fulfill Moondancer's wish, AND an old fantasy of Twilight's at the same time, though she is supervising the whole thing. She has gone over it all with Moondancer, and will be showing up herself when the powers of darkness part begins. The only problem with this theory is that the description explicitly states everything in the story is consensual, and Twilight would not be aware that Moondancer is actually here before she cast the amnesia spell. It might not be enough to sink this, but then again it might. Twilight did say that she was giving herself to Luna in this manner so her lover would be able to learn about her better...
5843620 Hi Blue_Paladin42, glad you're liking it. The sexy-times will be skewed towards bondage, but there's plenty (I hope) of other games to keep things interesting. I enjoyed writing the adventure side of things quite a bit, even if it is rather rough around the edges in places.
Oooh, now the real fun begins.
Also, this chapter may have the best sex you have ever written.
5855027 Thanks Blue_Paladin42
, it's very kind of you to say so.
hmm getting really interesting now they're separated
where did you get the image you used for this?
5855933 Well, I've got to be honest, they won't be apart for that long. I'll try to keep things interesting though.
5860071 Commissioned it from Sawitry on Deviant Art.
Next chapter should be good. Hehe.
awesome, love this chapter
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Ooo, clever girl...
More clever than she meant to be, even.
Heh, Twilight just can't stop her tendency towards heroism.
"Entice's" panic only further convinces me that Moony is the real deal.
Dat plan.
Holy crap you updated a lot though.
:o
Luna gunna be sorry she missed that one. Dayum Twi. You kinky.
Dat slip of the tongue from Moony. Waitressing indeed. Probably still too soon for me to yell confirmed in triumph, but still...
Most of the sex scenes are rather short, though for the most part the quality is everything I'd hoped it would be. Really loved the body writing/runes scene.
The end of this chapter (and the ones leading up to this) seem to call back to the first in interesting ways. It seems to be a choice between what looks like the Good Victory and Evil Defeat endings Luna had planned (though I hope we still have some chapters left. Your writing is incredible, even if the clop tends to be shorter than I usually go for). Despite Luna's hints at the beginning, Moondancer doesn't seem quite corrupt and hasn't betrayed Twilight despite Luna's plans. I'm interpreting this part as Moondancer subtly saying that she's okay with taking Entice's side if Twilight's fears of betraying her was the only thing holding her back.
Which brings up an interesting question. Twilight is a good person, but would she indulge in her darker side if her friends/lovers were okay with it, even if society and Princess Celestia were not? That seems to be what Luna's looking for here.
There is something that's been bothering me for a while. Is the castle librarian here part of Luna's setup, or did they find an actual remnant of the previous occupants?
:o
Uh-oh. Did Luna perhaps underestimate just how tenacious Twilight can be?
......Nah. Probably not.
This has been fun to read. Six chapters at once is great. Now that we're spoiled we want more. MORE! Now I know how Twilight must feel, lol.