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Edited / proof-read by Knight of Cerebus

Princess Luna hatches a cunning plan when she notices an attraction between her lover, Twilight Sparkle, and Celestia.

Twilunestia, no incest.
This story skirts the edges of what's permissible for the Teen tag. If that sounds bad to you, please don't read this story.

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Comments ( 48 )

Ooooooh.

No princest? :duck: Aw.

:trollestia:

This was a nice touch. Personally, I don't think it was quite as good as Twilight's Plan, but that might just be because this is a one-shot. The epilogue was hilarious though, I could see this as a chapter from the other story.

that ending xD

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Sorry, Blue_Paladin42, just wasn't the focus of the story. Hope you enjoyed it anyway.


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Thanks, BeneathTheShade - I can quite understand favouring Twilight's Plan over this one, both very different fics. Glad you liked the ending.


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Glad you liked the ending too, RainLight :twilightsheepish:


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I may go full three-way next time, but I've got a lot of other stories to write before I get to the next TwiLunEstia. Hope you enjoyed it anyway, Mugen Kagemaru

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I'm guessing it's the same person who posted a Youtube video to my profile page that says 'You suck'. Based on the accompanying comment, I believe that they don't like TwiLuna. Eh. You can't please everyone.

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I still haven't had a chance (SOON), as this went up quite literally as I was turning in, and I wasn't going to get enough sleep as it was...:raritydespair:

I have no doubt I will enjoy it however. (I was teasing about the princest. :trollestia:)

Read it!

Oh yes, this was muy cute. :rainbowkiss:

Oh my. :rainbowderp:

Alright, not bad at all. Have thumbs-up and fave.

Ah ha! The sex has been doubled!

erisian

paean

Words. :pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp: Fancy words. :heart::heart:
You sexy, sexy beast.

Complete, but it can't be complete ... we just got to the fun part :raritydespair:. Seriously though nice fic. Sad that it had to end so soon, but good nonetheless.

That epilogue, lolol!

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Thanks, Metroid_Freak - appreciate it :twilightsmile:

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Thanks guys :twilightsheepish:

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Thanks, dragonjek. I'm never quite sure where to set characters' vocabulary, but I'm glad you approve :twilightblush:

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Glad you enjoyed it, TheGreatEater. I hope to be writing more stuff in the near future, although it probably won't be Twilunesita.

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Thanks, Hobbestc. The ending was an afterthought, but people seem to like it, which is nice :scootangel:

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Oh noez! Seriously though, I'll probably stop by your user page on and off to see what stuff you come up with. Best of luck to you.

Wanderbolt

Is it wrong that I read this in a souther accent?

After reading this I've decided to check out Twilight's plan. FYI, Tia/Twi is my favorite ship so this one definitely gets an upvote.

Luna's prankery. Celesia's calm and willing acceptance. Twilight's shock, turned to horror, turned to realization, turned to amazement.

Being turned on by knowledge.

D.... damn you. :heart:

This was inventive, creative, and amazingly well-thought-out. :twilightsmile: :trollestia:

Now someone give me a Luna emote. NOW. :flutterrage:

Thanks for the suppression

4658334 4659098 Thanks, StormLuna and Hoof of Approval, glad you like it. I also long for Luna emoticons, but doubt they will even happen.

4660119 RandomString, I love that avatar of yours!

Haha, adorable little Twilestia.

4661301 Thanks, StormLuna - love yours too. :trollestia:


4661359 Thanks, secondaryspine, glad you enjoyed it.

You the Cracker(Celestia), Asain(Twilight), and Black Pony:(Luna). But were'S the Hawain(Cadence)?:derpytongue2:

very fun read.
has a fav.

The ending was rather rushed (the whole thing devolving into back and forth dialogue was mainly responsible for that), but otherwise not bad for a one-shot.

It's more like fifty shades of grey xD

4909434 It's best you don't understand. For the sake of your brain:derpytongue2:

4909487 And you can't understand a simple racist joke? You, bitch, should please me.:trollestia:

So there is a spelling error here

"Their noble sacrifice is well appreciated, and I’m sure that Rainbow Dash’s suggestion that she and I attend the Wanderbolt show here in a couple of weeks, in the Royal Enclosure, no less, is entirely selfless,"

this should be "Their noble sacrifice is well appreciated, and I’m sure that Rainbow Dash’s suggestion that she and I attend the Wonderbolt show here in a couple of weeks, in the Royal Enclosure, no less, is entirely selfless,"

Bookshelves that she noticed now looked suspiciously well organised.

this should be Bookshelves that she noticed now looked suspiciously well organized.

Twilight swatted Luna's flank with her tail, but made no other response, completely focussed on the scroll in front of her.

this should be Twilight swatted Luna's flank with her tail, but made no other response, completely focused on the scroll in front of her.

The squirming body that had been beneath Twilight suddenly disappeared, and she dropped onto the cushions. A wide-eyed and focussed Princess Celestia reappeared in front of Twilight, lost for words.

this should be The squirming body that had been beneath Twilight suddenly disappeared, and she dropped onto the cushions. A wide-eyed and focused Princess Celestia reappeared in front of Twilight, lost for words.

Very few of them realised that it was a scrying mirror.

this should be Very few of them realized that it was a scrying mirror.

I shall play poor, innocent 'Tia, who has agreed to teach her favourite student one more lesson for old time's sake.

this should be I shall play poor, innocent 'Tia, who has agreed to teach her favorite student one more lesson for old time's sake.

Twilight climbed the spiralling staircase to the observatory at the appointed hour. She hesitantly knocked on the door.

Twilight climbed the spiraling staircase to the observatory at the appointed hour. She hesitantly knocked on the door. Other than that, the story is a good story.

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Hi King of Kings, thanks for the feedback. I'm afraid I can't see the difference between my and your version of the first line of text. As for the rest, the difference is British English vs American English (and a couple of words where one spelling is more popular than another).

Thank you for mentioning them, but I don't plan on changing them to the Americanised form, as I'm content enough with the story as it is.

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Oh whoops. Sorry about that. I didn't realize that you were British. I guess that explains why I thought some of the spelling/grammar was incorrect. but does that mean that the British spelling of the word focused has two c's in it? Just curious.

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No problem.

As for focussed, yeah, I argue with my proofreader on that one. Focused is both British and American English, but focussed is also valid in British English (although it is a less common variant), and for some reason I spell it as 'focussed' when using the word (I presume you mean two 's's, rather than two 'c's).

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Yes, yes I did mean two s's instead of two c's. my bad.

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I think the first line is "Wanderbolt" vs "Wonderbolt". That's the only typo that I've picked up on so far.

5463684 D'oh! :twilightoops: Thanks for pointing that one out, AcademicPony. Corrected.

Me liked this cuz wuz vell dunn gg :trollestia:

Wut was that last bit? I could't tell wut was really going on. I guess I just suck at Implications, huh?

6594021 Sorry it wasn't clearer. It was implied that Twilight called out Celestia's name during sex with Luna. Luna decided to wreak vengeance by bonking Twilight on the head.

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Thankx for clearing that up.

It seems like a great story, although a little bit strange, it will be a serious step in self-education. You need to trust your children and their choice because they are a new generation. We are at home, using all the services that positively affect our children. The youngest daughter loves her for 5 years and watches this cartoon on Netflix Our oldest daughter uses https://writingbros.com/ for homework and writing. We work hard to educate them and find the best educational resources. It's a shame that in my life there were no such cartoons, they are incomparable.

Can confirm much of polyamory is polite scheming to get everyone interacting together.

Comment posted by darrenbailey894 deleted Jun 20th, 2022

"Where do you get the energy from? Is there a fusion core in the moon that you can tap into or something?"

:rainbowlaugh:

Tis both hilarious and fun! Great read!

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