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Very cool. I love Twilights confusion in this chapter
You've got the set-up, and your first steps out of the gate are solid. Now we get to watch the race
Fun stuff so far. I'll enjoy watching this unfold.
This is turning out just as fun as I had hoped it would.
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Thanks guys - I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far
ZOMBIE FIC! KILL IT BEFORE IT LAYS ZOMBIE EGGS!
This should have been the first chapter. Then you have the previous chapter at the end so the audience is just as befuddled as Twilight the whole time.
5634879 I did toy with the idea, but that then makes the whole 'consent' thingy even more murky than it already is. Not interested in writing a rape fic. The first chapter is setup, establishes Twilight's inclinations, and lets her give clear and knowledgable consent for all that happens. That in turn makes it far easier for her consent of what happens after to be established.
Plus putting it at the end would either make the whole tone of the story a mystery rather than an adventure, or else appear as a deus ex machina cop-out to explain the weird stuff.
Nothing good can come from this.
5635737 Oh, lots of good will come from it, promise!
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Well, from a normal person`s perspective, nothing good can come from this. ...Then again, I don`t think anyone on this site is normal. So, touché.