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You know, I had a rather strange problem reading the story so far.
Here it is: 'Moondancer' works just fine as an original character. In other words, I see nothing of Luna in her. Which begs the question whether the whole Luna-impersonates-Moondancer ploy was even really needed. This could've been just a young Twilight and Moondancer exploring the old Castle of the Two Sisters. What does it really add?
As it is, I keep looking for luna-ish clues in Moondancer's behaviour, and it's actually a little distracting.