Celestia Gets Drunk

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Biker_Dash

Biker_Dash #1 · Jan 6th, 2015 · 2 · ·

poisonflame616

poisonflame616 #2 · Jan 6th, 2015 · · ·

Celestia unleashed a devastating, toxic belch directly into Twilight's open mouth.
Twilight's eyes widened. Her face contorted in agony, her knees buckling as she toppled to the ground. She writhed and choked on the ground, gasping desperately for air after the closest thing Equestria had ever experienced to Chernobyl.

I know Celestia is immortal, but damn!!!, for a Chernobyl level burp she must have down half the booze in Equestria

on the plus side, she must have got Twilight drunk from the fumes because it lead to them being friends with benefits

charliebrown921

charliebrown921 #3 · Jan 7th, 2015 · · ·

Mudkipman98

Mudkipman98 #4 · Jan 7th, 2015 · 4 · ·

This was... Interesting to say the least. I think that all of the poop and fart "jokes" were completely unnecessary and they completely ruined the comedy. The other jokes were okay and got a chuckle out of me, especially the one about Chernobyl, but just throwing in a poop or fart joke for no reason isn't funny. I'll admit they're hard to execute in any way, but forced jokes are never funny. Overal I enjoyed it, but the comedy could use some work.

Purple_Smart