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Adagio had worked hard to get this far. Now was the time to reap the rewards of all the plans, schemes, and gambles. Now this was the finale of the Battle of the Bands.

[Teen rating for excessive swearing]


When watching the 'Welcome to the show' music video, I found myself asking 'What were the sirens thinking?' This is my answer to that question.

Was just in the mood to write something pony. I liked it, so decided to share.

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That was pretty awesome.

This is one of those fics that I want to like, but the format kind of kills it for me.

9190834
I’m sorry to hear that, but thank you for letting me know. If you don’t mind answering, could you please tell me more? Is it the interposed song lyrics, the way I did the telepathy, or something else? I’m always keen to learn. Thanks.

9191057
It's more just the structure of the thoughts.
The fact that they're done like a script is too off putting

9191067
Ah, that makes sense. Thanks for letting me know :twilightsmile: I’ll need to do some thinking on this.

she had once lost an eisteddfod to a senile ape who had written a ballad in praise of a leek!

:rainbowlaugh: We need to see a fanfic about this now :rainbowlaugh:

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