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Fluttershy awakes on Hearth's Warming Day to find a surprising gift waiting for her. Over the next twelve days, Princess Twilight Sparkle continues to send her a chain of amazing presents.

But just what did Fluttershy do to receive such wonderful treasures?

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FIRST! Very cute. Twilishy is a ship I never really paid much mind to, but this is superb.

ARTL #2 · Dec 25th, 2014 · · 1 ·

My dear Author,

'Tis a most excellent tale, indeed. Very good!


Happy Hearth's Warming,

ARTL

Well, when you need to impress the love of your life, you do it like this, dood.

5423679 Thank you :twilightsmile: Merry Christmas

5423710 Indeed you do. Merry Christmas

5423683 My dear reader

'Tis a joy and a pleasure to know you enjoyed my story

Happy Hearth's Warming to you too

TheMusicalBoy93

That is the most adorable thing I have ever read. I'm actually tearing up from the sheer amount of feels in this story. Totally subscribing, or whatever it is. Amazing, just amazing, that story. Best. ∞/10 on that.

After a while, they offered to take me for a fly.

I love this line. It makes perfect sense that a pegasus would say that as casually as another pony saying, "Going for a walk." :pinkiehappy:

tricks of manoeuvres.

Or.

Although, some of her questions were a tiny bit, um… personal,

Naughty Cadance. :trollestia:

With drunken love,

Fluttershy is best alcoholic. :yay:

if not invasive and slightly stalker-ish, detail.

Again, the beautifully casual way that's expressed is so in keeping with Fluttershy.

Twilight is best suitor. :twilightsmile:

I give this story: :twilightsmile: :twilightsmile: :twilightsmile: :twilightsmile: :twilightsmile: :yay: :yay: :yay: :yay: :yay:

The only minus i can find in this story is that you described not one but two instances of a "wingboner" yea not a big fan of that word.
Otter then that i relay did enjoy this fic, and i think i got not only inspiration but also motivation to finish up my TwiShy fic so i must thank you for that sir and or madam.
On a rating from me i'll give you a 4/5
:twilightsmile::heart::yay:
~Tobben

5440145 I understand your disliking of the whole "wingboner" thing. But this is what I think about it;

Pegasi wings are used to convey how a Pegasus is feeling. For example, if a Pegasus is walking around with their head held high and their wings outstretched, it's a show of pride or confidence. And if a Pegasus taken by surprise, or startled, their wings extend to make them look bigger, much like many mammals do by extending the hairs on their body, such as cats and - indeed, this is a true fact - humans.

The two examples of "wingboners" in this story are not examples of sexual arousal, but of shock and surprise. Even though Fluttershy is not in any danger from any form of predator or competing pony, the shock that she feels from seeing the rare gems in one of her presents and from Twilight's confession trigger her primal fight-or-flight instincts, and her body reacts in the only way it knows how; to make herself look bigger than she really is, because she's scared.

Also;

i must thank you for that sir and or madam.

I think my profile name is more than enough indication of my gender :raritywink::rainbowlaugh:

5440979
I understand why some folks use the term but i'm just not a big fan of it. Much like all the other overused fandome "jokes"

Yea i can see now, did not read the user name until now. Sorry :twilightblush:
~Tobben

Oh dear god, my heart! This story is simply to good to be put into words!

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