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Twilight and Fluttershy go out on there very first date together. Fluttershy is just hoping to have a good time and Twilight, well, she wants everything to be just perfect for the both of them. Everything seems well, until their friends start joining in on their date. What will happen? Read on to find out. Twishy!!!
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good story
Twishy one of my favorite pairs !!!!!!
but i kind of got confused... Twi is supposed to be an alicorn or a unicorn.. 'cause you first said that she was an alicorn, but then you said she was an unicorn
This story is neither Anthro nor Straight...
5602646 It was a mistake
5602498 Yeah, I thought I was writing down alicorn instead of unicorn. Sorry about that
. She's an alicorn throughout this story
5602650 How?
5602817 I thought I was on Show Me the Light, which is a straight shipping and I thought I was adding that to the group not Date Night
5602832 Ah; anyone mistake then.
5602832 how is this straight?
This story is all over the place, but it was entertaining.
It was cute yes and i love TwiShy, just a few miner details i found annoying and confusing.
Mobile phones and texting? You do know you'r in Equestria right, or is this an anthro version?
An author's not in the middle of the story can ruin the experience a little bit, that and the (1) and (2) every wear, and formatting needs a little work, was a bit confusing to read.
Over all i'll give this story a 3/5. Not something i would read again, but i'll add it to my TwiShy library because of very cute TwiShy.
Not that my rating means anything.
~Tobben
5610035 Honestly your rating actually helps me a lot because I'm not all that good of a writer, so a little criticism does help. I wanted to leave out the numbers, but I felt like certain things needed an explanation. As for the texting I just wanted to find some way for them to talk to each other plus, I normally don't stay too canon to the show when I write comedy so thats why there are cell phones
5611448 Well, Hasbro triedputting in straight couples (Blueblood and Rarity, Twilight and Flash Sentry, Big mac and Cheerilee) and the fandom only responded negatively towards them, so deal with the lesbian couples because they aren't leaving. Besides they're more believable than straight couples in this series in my opinion (not that I have anything against heterosexuals)
why is this in the straight shipping group?
It's under Fluttershy.
5711058 It was a slip up. I didn't mean to do that, sorry
Does that not mean Twilight minds having Fluttershy over? Or am I just confused?
6262662 I believe you're just confused
. Of course she wants her over. Why else would Twilight say yes?
6263455 the way I read it is that fluttershy is asking if twilight minds if she stays over... Shouldn't it be that she doesn't mind having Fluttershy over?
6264914 In the story, I'm saying Twilight was so excited that in her she imagined she was cheering and doing cartwheels. But, not to scare off Fluttershy she just simply said, "Yes."
Hopefully I'm not being rude, but if you were having someone over, why would you cheer in your head despite the fact that you dislike them?
I hope this answers your question, if not then I'm confused by what you're asking.
6265064 ah ok now I get it
no it's not that I think she didn't want her over, it's just the wording that got me slightly confused XD good job on the story by the way! Really enjoyed it!